Hi, Justin B Rye <justin.byam....@gmail.com> wrote: > Holger Wansing wrote: > > --- pkgtools.sgml (Revision 11106) > > +++ pkgtools.sgml (Arbeitskopie) > > @@ -72,6 +72,17 @@ > > <tt>/usr/share/doc/apt-doc/guide.html/index.html</tt> (you will have to > > install > > the <tt>apt-doc</tt> package). > > > > +<p>Please note that starting with Debian Jessie, the most popular > > +<prgn/apt-get/ and <prgn/apt-cache/ commands got an equivalent via > > +the new <prgn/apt/ binary. So some frequently used commands like > > +<prgn/apt-get update/, <prgn/apt-get upgrade/, <prgn/apt-get install/, > > +<prgn/apt-get remove/, <prgn/apt-cache search/, or <prgn/apt-cache show/ > > +now can also be called simply via <prgn/apt/, say <prgn/apt update/, > > +<prgn/apt upgrade/, <prgn/apt install/, <prgn/apt remove/, <prgn/apt > > search/, > > +or <prgn/apt show/ respective. To reflect this, we have listed both > ^^^^^^^^^^ > > +variants (the <prgn/apt-get/ and the <prgn/apt/ command) in the > > +examples below. > > + > > Where you've got the adjective "respective" there, the grammatical > version would have the adverb "respectively"; but the *natural* way > of saying this, here as almost always, would be to leave the word out > completely. You don't need to say that the two lists match up; after > all, why would anyone expect you to have scrambled them?
ok > > <item>To remove the foo package and its configuration files from > > your > > system, run: > > <example>apt-get purge foo</example> > > + or <example>apt purge foo</example> > > > > + <item>To list all packages, for which newer package versions are > ^ > Surplus comma. English would only have one here if having newer > versions available was a defining characteristic of packages. ok. > > + available, run: > > + <example>apt list --upgradable</example> > > + > [...] > > > > @@ -44,12 +47,41 @@ > > <example>http://ftp.us.debian.org/debian stable main contrib > > non-free</example> > > > > <p>You can replace ftp.us.debian.org (the mirror in the United States) > > with the > > -name of a faster Debian mirror near you. See the mirror list at > > +name of a faster Debian mirror near by you. See the mirror list at > > This isn't an improvement. ok. Holger -- ============================================================ Created with Sylpheed 3.5.0 under D E B I A N L I N U X 8 . 0 " J E S S I E " . Registered Linux User #311290 - https://linuxcounter.net/ ============================================================
