On Wed, 2003-11-05 at 08:19, Marc Dequènes wrote:
> * Package name    : ircopm-ptlink
>   Description     : Open Proxy Monitor for PTlink IRCd

Open Proxy Monitor isn't a proper noun, and as such should not be
capitalized here.

> PTlink is an advanced IRC server, used by the Portuguese PTLink
> network It is fast, reliable, and powerful with good support for
         ^ insert period here

> services.
> .
> This package provide a service able to scan clients on connect
> for open proxies, and gline them for security purpose if needed.

Change "gline" to "G-line" or perhaps "G: line" to emphasize that it is
the IRC configuration line and not some strange verb that the reader
hasn't heard of.

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