Dear Debian maintainer,

On Friday, March 18, 2011, I sent you a notification about the beginning of a 
review
action on debconf templates for libzorpll.

Then, I sent you a bug report with rewritten templates and announcing
the beginning of the second phase of this action: call for translation
updates.

Translators have been working hard and here is now the result of their efforts.

Please consider using it EVEN if you committed files to your
development tree as long as they were reported.

The attached tarball contains:

- debian/changelog with the list of changes
- debian/control with rewrites of packages' descriptions
- debian/<templates> with all the rewritten templates file(s)
- debian/po/*.po with all PO files (existing ones and new ones)

As said, please use *at least* the PO files as provided here,
preferrably over those sent by translators in their bug reports. All
of them have been checked and reformatted. In some cases, formatting
errors have been corrected.

The patch.rfr file contains a patch for the templates and control
file(s) alone.

Please note that this patch applies to the templates and control
file(s) of your package as of Friday, March 18, 2011. If your package was 
updated
in the meantime, I may have updated my reference copy....but I also
may have missed that. This is indeed why I suggested you do not
modified such files while the review process was running,
remember..:-)

It is now safe to upload a new package version with these changes.

Please notify me of your intents with regards to this. 

There is of course no hurry to update your package but feel free to
contact me in case you would need sponsoring or any other action to
fix this.



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--- libzorpll.old/debian/libzorpll3.9-0.templates       2011-03-14 
20:13:02.927161205 +0100
+++ libzorpll/debian/libzorpll3.9-0.templates   2011-04-02 09:05:26.102150469 
+0200
@@ -1,9 +1,16 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# debian-l10n-engl...@lists.debian.org for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: zorplib/admin-email
 Type: string
 Default: NONE
-_Description: Administrator's email address:
- Various Zorp applications are able to send a notification e-mail to an
- administrator's address in case of an unexpected process termination. If you
- don't wish to receive such notifications, leave this field blank or specifiy
- NONE.
-
+_Description: Email address for Zorp notifications:
+ Some Zorp applications are able to send a notification email in case
+ of an unexpected process termination. Leave this empty (or specify
+ "NONE") if no such notifications should be sent.
--- libzorpll.old/debian/control        2011-03-14 20:13:02.927161205 +0100
+++ libzorpll/debian/control    2011-03-19 17:37:45.376585307 +0100
@@ -9,24 +9,24 @@
 Section: libs
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
-Description: Low level library functions for Zorp
- Zorp is a new generation firewall. It is essentially a transparent proxy
- firewall, with strict protocol analyzing proxies, a modular architecture,
- and fine-grained control over the mediated traffic. Configuration decisions
- are scriptable with the Python based configuration language.
+Description: Zorp low-level functions
+ Zorp is an application-layer firewall using a modular architecture of
+ strict protocol-analyzing transparent proxies, giving fine-grained
+ control over the mediated traffic. Configuration decisions are
+ scriptable in the Python-based configuration language.
  .
- This package contains low level library functions needed by Zorp and
+ This package contains low-level library functions needed by Zorp and
  associated programs.
 
 Package: libzorpll-dev
 Section: libdevel
 Architecture: any
 Depends: libzorpll3.9-0 (= ${binary:Version}), ${misc:Depends}, 
libglib2.0-dev, libcap-dev [linux-any], libssl-dev
-Description: Low level library functions for Zorp, development files
- Zorp is a new generation firewall. It is essentially a transparent proxy
- firewall, with strict protocol analyzing proxies, a modular architecture,
- and fine-grained control over the mediated traffic. Configuration decisions
- are scriptable with the Python based configuration language.
+Description: Zorp low-level functions - development files
+ Zorp is an application-layer firewall using a modular architecture of
+ strict protocol-analyzing transparent proxies, giving fine-grained
+ control over the mediated traffic. Configuration decisions are
+ scriptable in the Python-based configuration language.
  .
  This package contains the development files necessary to create programs
  based on libzorpll.
@@ -36,11 +36,11 @@
 Architecture: any
 Priority: extra
 Depends: libzorpll3.9-0 (= ${binary:Version}), ${misc:Depends}
-Description: Low level library functions for Zorp, debug version
- Zorp is a new generation firewall. It is essentially a transparent proxy
- firewall, with strict protocol analyzing proxies, a modular architecture,
- and fine-grained control over the mediated traffic. Configuration decisions
- are scriptable with the Python based configuration language.
+Description: Zorp low-level functions - debugging version
+ Zorp is an application-layer firewall using a modular architecture of
+ strict protocol-analyzing transparent proxies, giving fine-grained
+ control over the mediated traffic. Configuration decisions are
+ scriptable in the Python-based configuration language.
  .
  This package contains the debugging symbols for libzorpll3.9-0.
 
@@ -49,11 +49,11 @@
 Architecture: any
 Priority: extra
 Depends: libzorpll3.9-0 (= ${binary:Version}), ${shlibs:Depends}, 
${misc:Depends}
-Description: Low level library functions for Zorp, debug version
- Zorp is a new generation firewall. It is essentially a transparent proxy
- firewall, with strict protocol analyzing proxies, a modular architecture,
- and fine-grained control over the mediated traffic. Configuration decisions
- are scriptable with the Python based configuration language.
+Description: Zorp low-level functions - memory debugging version
+ Zorp is an application-layer firewall using a modular architecture of
+ strict protocol-analyzing transparent proxies, giving fine-grained
+ control over the mediated traffic. Configuration decisions are
+ scriptable in the Python-based configuration language.
  .
  This package contains the same library as libzorpll but with memtrace memory
  debugging code enabled.
--- libzorpll.old/debian/changelog      2011-03-14 20:13:02.927161205 +0100
+++ libzorpll/debian/changelog  2011-04-21 18:24:34.181364313 +0200
@@ -1,3 +1,20 @@
+libzorpll (3.9.0.1-6) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
+
+  * Debconf templates and debian/control reviewed by the debian-l10n-
+    english team as part of the Smith review project. Closes: #620468
+  * [Debconf translation updates]
+  * Danish (Joe Hansen).  Closes: #621127
+  * German (Chris Leick).  Closes: #622285
+  * French (Steve Petruzzello).  Closes: #622738
+  * Czech (Michal Simunek).  Closes: #622789
+  * Spanish; (Francisco Javier Cuadrado).  Closes: #623025
+  * Russian (Yuri Kozlov).  Closes: #623362
+  * Swedish (Martin Bagge / brother).  Closes: #623406
+  * Portuguese (Américo Monteiro).  Closes: #623538
+  * Dutch; (Jeroen Schot).  Closes: #623589
+
+ -- Christian Perrier <bubu...@debian.org>  Sat, 02 Apr 2011 09:10:26 +0200
+
 libzorpll (3.9.0.1-5) unstable; urgency=low
 
   * Moved from experimental to unstable.

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