Package: defoma
Version: 0.11.8-0.1
Severity: minor

defoma.1 has some spelling and grammar errors.  I suggest the
following changes.  

           - Jim Van Zandt


--- man/defoma.1-orig   2005-08-28 16:55:11.000000000 -0400
+++ man/defoma.1        2005-08-28 17:00:32.000000000 -0400
@@ -86,17 +86,17 @@
 starts/finishes, respectively.
 .PP
 .B Id cache
-is another feature of Defoma. The possible problem of automatic
+is another feature of Defoma. A possible problem of automatic
 configuration is name space confliction. Usually applications
 access fonts through their logical font names (like XLFDs and
 PostScript font names) rather than the fonts themselves (like
-font files). Logical font names, called identifier in
-Defoma, can easily confclict especially if aliases are permitted. 
-Through Id cache mechanism, only one font is actually installed
+font files). Logical font names, called identifiers in
+Defoma, can easily conflict especially if aliases are permitted. 
+Through the Id cache mechanism, only one font is actually installed
 for each identifier even if several fonts provide the same identifier.
 .PP
 .B Id Substitution
-is additional feature to
+is an additional feature of
 .BR "Id cache" .
 It makes a certain font provide a certain id specified in a rulefile.
 Rulefile describes need-to-be-substituted (in other words, required) ids 
@@ -124,9 +124,9 @@
 .hy
 as a conffile, so that users can modify the hints.
 .br
-Following is the example of hintfile. 
+Following is an example hintfile. 
 .B defoma-hints
-is a tool to help generating hints as well as hintfile, so
+is a tool to help generating hints as well as hintfiles, so
 you do not have to create one from scratch.
 
 .nf

-- System Information:
Debian Release: testing/unstable
  APT prefers testing
  APT policy: (990, 'testing'), (500, 'oldstable'), (500, 'unstable')
Architecture: i386 (i686)
Shell:  /bin/sh linked to /bin/bash
Kernel: Linux 2.4.29
Locale: LANG=C, LC_CTYPE=C (charmap=ANSI_X3.4-1968)

Versions of packages defoma depends on:
ii  dialog                    1.0-20050306-1 Displays user-friendly dialog boxe
ii  file                      4.12-1         Determines file type using "magic"
ii  perl                      5.8.7-4        Larry Wall's Practical Extraction 
ii  whiptail                  0.51.6-26      Displays user-friendly dialog boxe

Versions of packages defoma recommends:
ii  libft-perl                    1.2-15     Perl module for the FreeType libra

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