Package: initrd-netboot
Severity: normal

The recently introduced debconf for this package IMHO need some rewrite, at
least for using capitals when needed, as well as using the recommended write
style (see Developer's Reference 6.5.2). /me should remember about bringing
a few caps keys to Jonas at next Debconf...:-)

The attached diff proposes such rewrite (which sometimes removes useless
redundant sentences between short and long descriptions).

If you apply all or part of this rewrite proposal, please warn translators
by using the podebconf-report-po utility after changing the templates master
file and running debconf-updatepo.

-- System Information:
Debian Release: testing/unstable
  APT prefers unstable
  APT policy: (500, 'unstable'), (500, 'testing'), (500, 'stable')
Architecture: i386 (i686)
Shell:  /bin/sh linked to /bin/bash
Kernel: Linux 2.6.11-1-686
Locale: LANG=fr_FR.UTF-8, LC_CTYPE=fr_FR.UTF-8 (charmap=UTF-8) (ignored: LC_ALL 
set to fr_FR.UTF-8)
--- initrd-netboot-tools.templates.master.old   2005-08-24 09:27:40.000000000 
+0200
+++ initrd-netboot-tools.templates.master       2005-08-24 09:33:19.000000000 
+0200
@@ -1,54 +1,47 @@
 Template: initrd-netboot-tools/initrd_exe
 Type: string
 Default: /usr/bin/cut /sbin/ifconfig /bin/grep /usr/bin/head /usr/bin/tr 
/sbin/route /sbin/udhcpc /bin/hostname
-_Description: extra initrd executables
- please list the executables used by the initrd.
+_Description: Extra initrd executables used by the initrd:
 
 Template: initrd-netboot-tools/initrd_files
 Type: string
 Default: /dev/ttyS0 /dev/console /dev/urandom
-_Description: extra initrd files
- please list the files used by the initrd.
+_Description: Extra initrd files:
 
 Template: initrd-netboot-tools/nic_modules
 Type: string
 Default: ne 3c509 3c59x 8139cp 8139too dmfe e100 eepro100 e1000 eexpress 
epic100 hp100 ne2k-pci sis900 tlan de4x5 tulip via-rhine yellowfin forcedeth
-_Description: network card modules
- please list the network card modules to be used by the initrd.
- .
- this will add the modules to the initrd, and probe each module in
+_Description: Network cards modules:
+ The listed modules will be added to the initrd and probed in
  order.
 
 Template: initrd-netboot-tools/nic_dep_modules
 Type: string
 Default: 8390 crc32 isa-pnp mii
-_Description: network card module dependencies
- please list the module dependencies required by the initrd.
+_Description: Network card modules dependencies required by the initrd:
 
 Template: initrd-netboot-tools/net_modules
 Type: string
 Default: nfs af_packet sunrpc unix lockd
-_Description: networking modules
- please list the networking modules required by the initrd.
+_Description: Networking modules required by the initrd:
 
 Template: initrd-netboot-tools/first_ethernet_only
 Type: boolean
 Default: true
-_Description: stop loading modules after first card is found
- after first ethernet card is found, do not probe for additional modules.
+_Description: Stop loading modules after then first network card is found?
 
 Template: initrd-netboot-tools/discover_probe
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
-_Description: use discover-data to probe for network cards
- enable this option to use discover-data to probe for network cards at boot
- time.  this may significantly increase the size of the initrd.
+_Description: Use discover-data to probe for network cards?
+ Enable this option to use discover-data to probe for network cards at boot
+ time.  This may significantly increase the size of the initrd.
 
 Template: initrd-netboot-tools/nfs_opts
 Type: string
 Default: ro,async,nolock
-_Description: mount options for NFS root
- please list the options passed to mount when mounting NFS root.
+_Description: Mount options for NFS root:
+ Please list the options passed to mount when mounting NFS root.
  .
  Example:
    ro,tcp,async,nolock
@@ -56,13 +49,13 @@
 Template: initrd-netboot-tools/debconf_overwrite_config
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
-_Description: overwrite configuration values
- enable this to overwrite values in the configuration file with values in
- debconf.  this should only be used to support debconf pre-seeding.
+_Description: Overwrite configuration values?
+ Enable this to overwrite values in the configuration file with values in
+ debconf.  This should only be used to support debconf pre-seeding.
 
 Template: initrd-netboot-tools/use_devfs
 Type: boolean
 Default: true
-_Description: mount devfs during initrd chroot mount
- enable this option to use mount devfs during the initrd phase of the
+_Description: Mount devfs during initrd chroot mount?
+ Enable this option to use mount devfs during the initrd phase of the
  chroot mount.

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