Package: einstein Version: 2.0.dfsg.2-5 Severity: normal Tags: patch While working on the German translation (cf. next bug) I noticed some issues with the help file, probably the author was not a native speaker. I'm neither one, so you might request a review on debian-l10n-english instead of using my patch.
The following changes apply to res/rules.txt
-The game goal is to open all cards in square of 6x6 cards. When
+The goal of the game is to open all cards in a square of 6x6 cards. When
-Every row of square contains cards of one type only. For example,
+Every row of the square contains cards of one type only. For example,
-Use logic and open cards with method of exclusion. If card doesn't
+Use logic and open cards with method of exclusion. If a card isn't
-opened, cell contains every possible cards. For example,
+open, the cell contains every possible card. For example,
-means that this cell may contain every rome digit with exception of
+means that this cell may contain every Roman digit with the exception of
-III (because card with III image is absent). To open card click on
+III (because card with III image is absent). To open a card click on
-Use tips to solve this puzzle. There is two types of tips:
+Use tips to solve this puzzle. There are two types of tips:
-horizontal and vertical. Vertical tips located at screen bottom.
+horizontal and vertical. Vertical tips are located at bottom of the screen.
-means that letter 'B' and '+' sign located in the same column.
+means that letter 'B' and '+' sign are located in the same column.
-Horizontal tips located at the right side of the puzzle square.
+Horizontal tips are located at the right side of the puzzle square.
-There is few type of horizontal tips. First type of horizontal
+There are a few types of horizontal tips. First type of horizontal
-tip says that two cards located at neighbour columns, but it is
+tip says that two cards are located at neighbouring columns, but it is
-unknown, which one is at the right side and thich is at the left:
+unknown, which one is at the right side and which one is at the left:
-Second tip type means that one cards is at the left of another.
+Second tip type means that one card is at the left of another.
-It says nothing about distance between that cards. They may be
+It says nothing about distance between those cards. They may be
-neighbour columns or at the opposite sides of puzzle field:
+in neighbouring columns or at the opposite sides of the puzzle field:
-two another cards:
+two other cards:
-All three cards must be located in neighbour columns, central
+All three cards must be located in neighbouring columns, the central
-card is always between other two, but it is unknown, which card is located
+card is always between other the other two, but it is unknown, which card is
located
-You can always see removed tips by pressing 'Switch' button.
+You can always see removed tips by pressing the 'Switch' button.
-- System Information:
Debian Release: 5.0.3
APT prefers stable
APT policy: (500, 'stable')
Versions of packages einstein depends on:
ii libc6 2.7-18 GNU C Library: Shared libraries
ii libfreetype6 2.3.7-2+lenny1 FreeType 2 font engine, shared lib
ii libgcc1 1:4.3.2-1.1 GCC support library
ii libsdl-mixer1.2 1.2.8-4 mixer library for Simple DirectMed
ii libsdl-ttf2.0-0 2.0.9-1 ttf library for Simple DirectMedia
ii libsdl1.2debian 1.2.13-2 Simple DirectMedia Layer
ii libstdc++6 4.3.2-1.1 The GNU Standard C++ Library v3
ii zlib1g 1:1.2.3.3.dfsg-12 compression library - runtime
einstein recommends no packages.
einstein suggests no packages.
-- no debconf information
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