Package: wodim
Version: 9:1.1.6-1
Severity: wishlist
Tags: patch
File: /usr/share/man/man1/wodim.1.gz

--- /usr/share/man/man1/wodim.1.gz
+++ -   2008-01-30 13:14:43.667524943 -0500
@@ -65,12 +65,12 @@
 .I device
 is the device file or label offered by the operating system to access the
 recorder with SCSI GENERIC (sg) interface. Note that some operating systems may
-provide separate device nodes for block oriented and sg access. For example, on
+provide separate device nodes for block\-oriented and sg access. For example, 
on
 older
 .I Linux
-systems the sg access was available trough
+systems, the sg access was available trough
 .IR /dev/sg...
-files while the block oriented access was done through associated (but not 
identic)
+files while the block oriented access was done through associated (but not 
identical)
 .IR /dev/hd...
 and 
 .IR /dev/sr...
@@ -115,9 +115,9 @@
 .PP
 As a special exception, the device specification can be
 .IR -1
-or just omited, which invokes automatic guessing of an appropriate device for
+or just ommitted, which invokes automatic guessing of an appropriate device for
 the selected operation. However, this guessing is not available everywhere and
-is not reliable, it is only available for user's convinience in simple
+is not reliable, it is only available for user's convenience in simple
 environments.
 .PP
 In 
@@ -141,15 +141,15 @@
 .SH "PROCESS SCHEDULING PRIORITY"
 .PP
 Wodim tries to get higher process priority using different methods. This is
-important because the burn process is usualy a realtime task, no long delays
-should occur while transmiting fresh data to the recorder. This is especially
-important on systems with insufficient RAM where swaping can create delays of
+important because the burn process is usually a realtime task, no long delays
+should occur while transmitting fresh data to the recorder. This is especially
+important on systems with insufficient RAM where swapping can create delays of
 many seconds.
 .PP
 A possible workaround on underpowered systems is the use of the burnfree or
 similar feature, allowing the recorder to resume.
 .PP
-Root permissions are usualy required to get higher process scheduling priority.
+Root permissions are usually required to get higher process scheduling 
priority.
 .PP
 On 
 .B SVr4 
@@ -512,7 +512,7 @@
 Wait for input to become available on standard input before trying to open
 the SCSI driver. This allows 
 .B wodim
-to read it's input from a pipe even
+to read its input from a pipe even
 when writing additional sessions to a multi session disk.
 When writing another session to a multi session disk,
 .B genisoimage 
@@ -605,7 +605,7 @@
 because some drives will not continue with certain types of bad CD-RW
 disks. Note also that
 .B wodim
-does it's best if the 
+does its best if the 
 .B \-force 
 flag is used but it finally depends on the drive's firmware 
 whether the blanking operation will succeed or not.
@@ -875,7 +875,7 @@
 .B mmc_dvdplusrw
 The generic SCSI-3/mmc-3 DVD+RW driver is auto-selected whenever
 a DVD+RW medium is found in an appropriate writer.
-As DVD+RW media needs to be formatted before it's first use, wodim
+As DVD+RW media needs to be formatted before its first use, wodim
 auto-detects this media state and performs a format before it starts
 to write.
 Note that for unknown reason, the DVD-Plus alliance does not
@@ -918,7 +918,7 @@
 .B philips_cdd522
 The driver for Philips CDD-522 is auto-selected when
 .B wodim
-finds a Philips CDD-522 which is the successor of the 521 or one of it's 
variants
+finds a Philips CDD-522 which is the successor of the 521 or one of its 
variants
 with Kodak label.
 .B wodim
 does not support Session At Once recording with these drives.
@@ -1027,7 +1027,7 @@
 .B burnfree 
 Turn the support for Buffer Underrun Free writing on.
 This only works for drives that support Buffer Underrun Free technology, which
-is available on most drives manufactured in this millenium. 
+is available on most drives manufactured in this millennium. 
 This may be called:
 .BR "Sanyo BURN-Proof" ,
 .BR "Ricoh Just-Link" ,
@@ -1218,10 +1218,10 @@
 strings. This option may be used to find SCSI address of the 
 CD/DVD-Recorder on a system. If some device types are invisible, try using
 .B dev=ATA:
-or similar option to give a hint about the device typ you are looking for.
+or similar option to give a hint about the device type you are looking for.
 The numbers printed out as labels are computed by: 
 .B "bus * 100 + target.
-On plattforms and device systems without persistent SCSI number management the
+On platforms and device systems without persistent SCSI number management the
 results are not reliable. Use the .B \-\-devices option instead.
 .TP
 .B \-\-devices
@@ -2053,7 +2053,7 @@
 .I target
 can be -1 to use the auto-guessing of the drive (see above).
 
-The value for driveropts may be omited or set to "" if no driveropts are used.
+The value for driveropts may be ommitted or set to "" if no driveropts are 
used.
 A typical line may look this way:
 .sp
 plex760= 0,5,0 12      50m     varirec=1
@@ -2066,7 +2066,7 @@
 .I plex760
 is at scsibus 0, target 5, lun 0 and should be used with speed 12 and
 a FIFO size of 50 MB. It also uses some device specific parameter.
-A second drive may is accesible via the device file /dev/hdd and uses the
+A second drive may is accessible via the device file /dev/hdd and uses the
 default speed and the default FIFO size.
 .RE
 
@@ -2163,7 +2163,7 @@
 maintainers (see below).
 .PP
 Many CD recorders have bugs and often require a firmware update to work
-correctly. If you exprience problems which cannot be solved or explained by the
+correctly. If you experience problems which cannot be solved or explained by 
the
 notes above, please look for instructions on the homepage of the particular
 manufacturer.
 .PP
@@ -2258,7 +2258,7 @@
 .SH BUGS
 .PP
 .B netscsid
-does not work properly and is generaly unmaintained. It is probably not
+does not work properly and is generally unmaintained. It is probably not
 compatible with rscsi from 
 .BR cdrtools
 either. Good bugfixes are welcome, talk to Cdrkit maintainers.
@@ -2345,11 +2345,11 @@
 Germany
 .fi
 .PP
-This application is a spinoff from the original program "cdrecord" delivered
+This application is derived from "cdrecord" as included
 in the cdrtools package [1] created by Joerg
-Schilling, who deserves the most credits for its success. However, he is not
+Schilling, who deserves most of the credit for its success. However, he is not
 involved into the development of this spinoff and therefore he shall not be
-made responsible for any problem caused by it. Do not refer to this application
+held responsible for any problems caused by it. Do not refer to this 
application
 as "cdrecord", do not try to get support for wodim by contacting the original
 authors.
 .PP
@@ -2369,7 +2369,7 @@
 [EMAIL PROTECTED]
 .br
 .PP
-writing at least a short description into the Subject and "Package: cdrkit" 
into the first line of the mail body.
+writing at least a short description into the Subject and "Package: cdrkit" in 
the first line of the mail body.
 .SH SOURCES
 .PP
 .br

--- /usr/share/man/man1/wodim.1.gz
+++ -   2008-01-30 13:14:43.667524943 -0500
@@ -65,12 +65,12 @@
 .I device
 is the device file or label offered by the operating system to access the
 recorder with SCSI GENERIC (sg) interface. Note that some operating systems may
-provide separate device nodes for block oriented and sg access. For example, on
+provide separate device nodes for block\-oriented and sg access. For example, 
on
 older
 .I Linux
-systems the sg access was available trough
+systems, the sg access was available trough
 .IR /dev/sg...
-files while the block oriented access was done through associated (but not 
identic)
+files while the block oriented access was done through associated (but not 
identical)
 .IR /dev/hd...
 and 
 .IR /dev/sr...
@@ -115,9 +115,9 @@
 .PP
 As a special exception, the device specification can be
 .IR -1
-or just omited, which invokes automatic guessing of an appropriate device for
+or just ommitted, which invokes automatic guessing of an appropriate device for
 the selected operation. However, this guessing is not available everywhere and
-is not reliable, it is only available for user's convinience in simple
+is not reliable, it is only available for user's convenience in simple
 environments.
 .PP
 In 
@@ -141,15 +141,15 @@
 .SH "PROCESS SCHEDULING PRIORITY"
 .PP
 Wodim tries to get higher process priority using different methods. This is
-important because the burn process is usualy a realtime task, no long delays
-should occur while transmiting fresh data to the recorder. This is especially
-important on systems with insufficient RAM where swaping can create delays of
+important because the burn process is usually a realtime task, no long delays
+should occur while transmitting fresh data to the recorder. This is especially
+important on systems with insufficient RAM where swapping can create delays of
 many seconds.
 .PP
 A possible workaround on underpowered systems is the use of the burnfree or
 similar feature, allowing the recorder to resume.
 .PP
-Root permissions are usualy required to get higher process scheduling priority.
+Root permissions are usually required to get higher process scheduling 
priority.
 .PP
 On 
 .B SVr4 
@@ -512,7 +512,7 @@
 Wait for input to become available on standard input before trying to open
 the SCSI driver. This allows 
 .B wodim
-to read it's input from a pipe even
+to read its input from a pipe even
 when writing additional sessions to a multi session disk.
 When writing another session to a multi session disk,
 .B genisoimage 
@@ -605,7 +605,7 @@
 because some drives will not continue with certain types of bad CD-RW
 disks. Note also that
 .B wodim
-does it's best if the 
+does its best if the 
 .B \-force 
 flag is used but it finally depends on the drive's firmware 
 whether the blanking operation will succeed or not.
@@ -875,7 +875,7 @@
 .B mmc_dvdplusrw
 The generic SCSI-3/mmc-3 DVD+RW driver is auto-selected whenever
 a DVD+RW medium is found in an appropriate writer.
-As DVD+RW media needs to be formatted before it's first use, wodim
+As DVD+RW media needs to be formatted before its first use, wodim
 auto-detects this media state and performs a format before it starts
 to write.
 Note that for unknown reason, the DVD-Plus alliance does not
@@ -918,7 +918,7 @@
 .B philips_cdd522
 The driver for Philips CDD-522 is auto-selected when
 .B wodim
-finds a Philips CDD-522 which is the successor of the 521 or one of it's 
variants
+finds a Philips CDD-522 which is the successor of the 521 or one of its 
variants
 with Kodak label.
 .B wodim
 does not support Session At Once recording with these drives.
@@ -1027,7 +1027,7 @@
 .B burnfree 
 Turn the support for Buffer Underrun Free writing on.
 This only works for drives that support Buffer Underrun Free technology, which
-is available on most drives manufactured in this millenium. 
+is available on most drives manufactured in this millennium. 
 This may be called:
 .BR "Sanyo BURN-Proof" ,
 .BR "Ricoh Just-Link" ,
@@ -1218,10 +1218,10 @@
 strings. This option may be used to find SCSI address of the 
 CD/DVD-Recorder on a system. If some device types are invisible, try using
 .B dev=ATA:
-or similar option to give a hint about the device typ you are looking for.
+or similar option to give a hint about the device type you are looking for.
 The numbers printed out as labels are computed by: 
 .B "bus * 100 + target.
-On plattforms and device systems without persistent SCSI number management the
+On platforms and device systems without persistent SCSI number management the
 results are not reliable. Use the .B \-\-devices option instead.
 .TP
 .B \-\-devices
@@ -2053,7 +2053,7 @@
 .I target
 can be -1 to use the auto-guessing of the drive (see above).
 
-The value for driveropts may be omited or set to "" if no driveropts are used.
+The value for driveropts may be ommitted or set to "" if no driveropts are 
used.
 A typical line may look this way:
 .sp
 plex760= 0,5,0 12      50m     varirec=1
@@ -2066,7 +2066,7 @@
 .I plex760
 is at scsibus 0, target 5, lun 0 and should be used with speed 12 and
 a FIFO size of 50 MB. It also uses some device specific parameter.
-A second drive may is accesible via the device file /dev/hdd and uses the
+A second drive may is accessible via the device file /dev/hdd and uses the
 default speed and the default FIFO size.
 .RE
 
@@ -2163,7 +2163,7 @@
 maintainers (see below).
 .PP
 Many CD recorders have bugs and often require a firmware update to work
-correctly. If you exprience problems which cannot be solved or explained by the
+correctly. If you experience problems which cannot be solved or explained by 
the
 notes above, please look for instructions on the homepage of the particular
 manufacturer.
 .PP
@@ -2258,7 +2258,7 @@
 .SH BUGS
 .PP
 .B netscsid
-does not work properly and is generaly unmaintained. It is probably not
+does not work properly and is generally unmaintained. It is probably not
 compatible with rscsi from 
 .BR cdrtools
 either. Good bugfixes are welcome, talk to Cdrkit maintainers.
@@ -2345,11 +2345,11 @@
 Germany
 .fi
 .PP
-This application is a spinoff from the original program "cdrecord" delivered
+This application is derived from "cdrecord" as included
 in the cdrtools package [1] created by Joerg
-Schilling, who deserves the most credits for its success. However, he is not
+Schilling, who deserves most of the credit for its success. However, he is not
 involved into the development of this spinoff and therefore he shall not be
-made responsible for any problem caused by it. Do not refer to this application
+held responsible for any problems caused by it. Do not refer to this 
application
 as "cdrecord", do not try to get support for wodim by contacting the original
 authors.
 .PP
@@ -2369,7 +2369,7 @@
 [EMAIL PROTECTED]
 .br
 .PP
-writing at least a short description into the Subject and "Package: cdrkit" 
into the first line of the mail body.
+writing at least a short description into the Subject and "Package: cdrkit" in 
the first line of the mail body.
 .SH SOURCES
 .PP
 .br

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