Hello Frank, On Mon, Oct 08, 2007 at 10:28:05PM +0200, Frank Lichtenheld wrote: > On Mon, Oct 08, 2007 at 06:43:57PM +0200, Helge Kreutzmann wrote: > > Here I am unsure, please verify: > > -"shlibs.local>, B</etc/dpkg/shlibs.override>, the B<shlibs> control area > > file " > > +"shlibs.local>, B</etc/dpkg/shlibs.override>, the B<shlibs> area in the > > controle file " > > "shlibs control file" is correct I think
The word I had really problems with is "area". For me "area" implies
some space which is separated. "shlibs control file area" is still
unclear to me. Could "area" may be dropped?
> > -"tarfile. If will use the directory to create the diff, but the tarfile to
> > "
> > +"tarfile. It will use the directory to create the diff, but the tarfile to
> > "
>
> "It" is more correct. Just writing "dpkg-source" is probably better.
Yes, I also would prefer to spell it out, I just made the minimal
patch necessary to get a sensible sentence.
Once I'll see the changes applied, I'll update the German man pages
accordingly (which probably will require few changes only).
Greetings
Helge
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