Dear Debian maintainer,

On Wednesday, June 27, 2007, I sent you a notification about the beginning of a 
review
action on debconf templates for dibbler.

Then, I sent you a bug report with rewritten templates and announcing
the beginning of the second phase of this action: call for translation
updates.

Translators have been working hard and here is now the result of their efforts.

Please consider using it EVEN if you committed files to your
development tree as long as they were reported.

The attached tarball contains:

- debian/changelog with the list of changes
- debian/control with rewrites of packages' descriptions
- debian/<templates> with all the rewritten templates file(s)
- debian/po/*.po with all PO files (existing ones and new ones)

As said, please use *at least* the PO files as provided here,
preferrably over those sent by translators in their bug reports. All
of them have been checked and reformatted. In some cases, formatting
errors have been corrected.

The patch-nopo file contains a patch for the templates and control file(s).

Please note that this patch applies to the templates and control
file(s) of your package as of Wednesday, June 27, 2007. If your package was 
updated
in the meantime, I may have updated my reference copy....but I also
may have missed that. This is indeed why I suggested you do not
modified such files while the review process was running,
remember..:-)

It is now safe to upload a new package version with these changes.

Please notify me of your intents with regards to this. 

There is of course no hurry to update your package but feel free to
contact me in case you would need sponsoring or any other action to
fix this.



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--- dibbler.old/debian/dibbler-client.templates 2007-06-21 10:27:47.137955020 
+0200
+++ dibbler/debian/dibbler-client.templates     2007-07-11 09:12:06.316596951 
+0200
@@ -1,3 +1,12 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# [EMAIL PROTECTED] for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: dibbler-client/title
 Type: title
 _Description: dibbler-client: DHCPv6 client
@@ -5,10 +14,11 @@
 Template: dibbler-client/start
 Type: boolean
 Default: true
-_Description: Do you want dibbler-client to start when system starts?
- Dibbler client can be configured to start at boot, so your host will have
- IPv6 set up after boot. This is generally a good idea. Make sure that
- there is a DHCPv6 server available in your network.
+_Description: Should the Dibbler client be launched when the system starts?
+ The Dibbler client can be configured to be launched when the system
+ is started. If you choose this option, this host will have a correct
+ IPv6 setup after booting. Please ensure that a DHCPv6 server is
+ available on the network.
 
 Template: dibbler-client/interfaces
 Type: string
@@ -21,8 +31,8 @@
 
 Template: dibbler-client/options
 Type: multiselect
-_Choices: dns, domain
+__Choices: dns, domain
 Default: dns
-_Description: What additional parameters should be obtained:
- The Dibbler client can request that the DHCPv6 server supply additional
+_Description: Additional parameters to obtain:
+ The Dibbler client can request that the DHCPv6 server supplies additional
  configuration parameters.
--- dibbler.old/debian/dibbler-relay.templates  2007-06-21 10:27:47.137955020 
+0200
+++ dibbler/debian/dibbler-relay.templates      2007-07-11 09:12:16.316147810 
+0200
@@ -1,3 +1,12 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# [EMAIL PROTECTED] for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: dibbler-relay/title
 Type: title
 _Description: dibbler-relay: DHCPv6 relay
@@ -5,12 +14,8 @@
 Template: dibbler-relay/start
 Type: boolean
 Default: true
-_Description: Do you want dibbler-relay to start when the system starts?
- Dibbler relay can be configured to start at boot. This node will then
- forward DHCPv6 messages between clients, servers and other relays.
+_Description: Should the Dibbler relay be launched when the system starts?
+ The Dibbler relay can be configured to be launched when the system is
+ started. If you choose this option, this node will forward
+ DHCPv6 messages between clients, servers and other relays.
 
-Template: dibbler-relay/config
-Type: note
-_Description: Modify /etc/dibbler/relay.conf before running the relay
- Without proper modifications, the relay will most likely refuse to start
- or will not forward DHCPv6 messages as expected.
--- dibbler.old/debian/dibbler-server.templates 2007-06-21 10:27:47.137955020 
+0200
+++ dibbler/debian/dibbler-server.templates     2007-07-11 09:12:21.315923240 
+0200
@@ -1,3 +1,12 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# [EMAIL PROTECTED] for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: dibbler-server/title
 Type: title
 _Description: dibbler-server: DHCPv6 server
@@ -5,13 +14,9 @@
 Template: dibbler-server/start
 Type: boolean
 Default: true
-_Description: Do you want dibbler-server to start when the system starts?
- Dibbler server can be configured to start at boot. This node will then act
- as a DHCPv6 server. It will provide IPv6 addresses and additional
+_Description: Should the Dibbler server be launched when the system starts?
+ The Dibbler server can be configured to be launched when the system
+ is started. If you choose this option, this node will act as a
+ DHCPv6 server. It will provide IPv6 addresses and additional
  configuration options to other nodes in the network.
 
-Template: dibbler-server/config
-Type: note
-_Description: Modify /etc/dibbler/server.conf before running the server
- Without proper modifications, the Dibbler server will most likely offer
- invalid addresses and options when started.
--- dibbler.old/debian/control  2007-06-21 10:27:47.137955020 +0200
+++ dibbler/debian/control      2007-07-11 09:12:46.314800389 +0200
@@ -11,10 +11,11 @@
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, debconf (>= 1.3.22)
 Recommends: dibbler-doc
 Description: portable DHCPv6 server
- This is a DHCPv6 server. It supports both stateful (i.e. IPv6 address 
- granting) as well as stateless (i.e. options granting) autoconfiguration 
- modes of DHCPv6 protocol. Relays are also supported. This package allows
- IPv6 hosts to be automatically configured in your network.
+ The Dibbler server supports both stateful (i.e. IPv6 address
+ granting) as well as stateless (i.e. options granting)
+ auto-configuration modes of the DHCPv6 protocol. Relays are also
+ supported. This package allows IPv6 hosts to be automatically
+ configured on the network.
  .
   Homepage: http://klub.com.pl/dhcpv6/
  
@@ -23,11 +24,12 @@
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, debconf (>= 1.3.22), ucf
 Recommends: dibbler-doc
 Description: portable DHCPv6 client
- This is a DHCPv6 client. It supports both stateful (i.e. IPv6 address
- granting) as well as stateless (i.e. option granting) autoconfiguration
- modes of the DHCPv6 protocol. Besides basic capabilities, it supports
- various DHCPv6 extensions, e.g. option renewal. Install Dibbler client if
- this host should obtain IPv6 addresses and options from a DHCPv6 server.
+ The Dibbler client supports both stateful (i.e. IPv6 address
+ granting) as well as stateless (i.e. option granting)
+ auto-configuration modes of the DHCPv6 protocol. Besides basic
+ capabilities, it supports various DHCPv6 extensions, for instance
+ option renewal. Installing Dibbler allows obtaining IPv6 addresses and
+ options from a DHCPv6 server.
  .
   Homepage: http://klub.com.pl/dhcpv6/
 
@@ -36,10 +38,10 @@
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, debconf (>= 1.3.22)
 Recommends: dibbler-doc
 Description: portable DHCPv6 relay
- This is a DHCPv6 relay. Relays are used as proxies between servers and
- clients. Their main advantage is the ability to support multiple remote 
- links using only one server. Install Dibbler relay if you want to serve 
- multiple not physically connected links with one DHCPv6 server.
+ Relays are used as proxies between servers and clients. Their main
+ advantage is the ability to support multiple remote links using only
+ one server. Installing Dibbler relay allows serving multiple, not
+ physically connected, links with one DHCPv6 server.
  .
   Homepage: http://klub.com.pl/dhcpv6/
 
@@ -48,11 +50,11 @@
 Section: doc
 Depends:
 Suggests: dibbler-server, dibbler-client, dibbler-relay
-Description: documentation for dibbler
+Description: documentation for Dibbler
  This package includes both user and developer documentation, covering all
- acpects of the Dibbler DHCPv6 implementation:
-  - server, client and relay usage and configuration
-  - various tips and frequently asked questions
-  - internal structure/code description and hints for developers
+ aspects of the Dibbler DHCPv6 implementation:
+  - server, client and relay usage and configuration;
+  - various tips and frequently asked questions;
+  - internal structure/code description and hints for developers.
  .
   Homepage: http://klub.com.pl/dhcpv6/
--- dibbler.old/debian/changelog        2007-06-21 10:27:47.137955020 +0200
+++ dibbler/debian/changelog    2007-07-27 09:19:07.866070310 +0200
@@ -1,3 +1,25 @@
+dibbler (0.6.0-3) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
+
+  * Debconf templates and debian/control reviewed by the debian-l10n-
+    english team as part of the Smith review project. Closes: #432651
+  * Debconf translation updates:
+    - Czech. Closes: #433099
+    - Russian. Closes: #433174
+    - German. Closes: #433238
+    - Vietnamese. Closes: #433789
+    - French. Closes: #433966
+    - Portuguese. Closes: #434195
+    - Brazilian Portuguese. Closes: #434745
+
+ -- Christian Perrier <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>  Wed, 11 Jul 2007 09:35:17 +0200
+
+dibbler (0.6.0-2) unstable; urgency=low
+
+  * Remove debconf notes and move them to README.Debian
+  * Lower the priority of start questions as they have a sane default
+
+ -- Christian Perrier <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>  Wed, 27 Jun 2007 18:59:25 +0200
+
 dibbler (0.6.0-1) unstable; urgency=low
 
   * New upstream release

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