Package: maint-guide
Version: 1.2.11
Severity: minor

Hi!

Section 6.4 _The dpatch and quiltsystems_[1] seems to lack a space in
its very title.
I would suggest:  s/quiltsystems/quilt systems/

Moreover, the same section states:

| The dpatch and quilt systems are of the simplest of such patch
| maintenance system proposed.

I don't know if this is correct, but sounds a bit strange.
Maybe

s/are of the simplest of/are two of the simplest/
s/system/sytems/

would improve the readability of the sentence, but I am not sure
(*not* being an English native speaker makes me uncertain).

[1] http://www.debian.org/doc/maint-guide/ch-build.en.html#s-dpatch


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