Package: dibbler
Version: N/A
Severity: normal
Tags: patch

Dear Debian maintainer,

On Wednesday, June 27, 2007, I notified you of the beginning of a review process
concerning debconf templates for dibbler.

The debian-l10n-english contributors have now reviewed these templates,
and the proposed changes are attached to this bug report.

Please review the suggested changes are suggested, and if you have any
objections, let me know in the next 3 days.

Please try to avoid uploading dibbler with these changes right now.

The second phase of this process will begin on Saturday, July 14, 2007, when I 
will
coordinate updates to translations of debconf templates.

The existing translators will be notified of the changes: they will
receive an updated PO file for their language.

Simultaneously, a general call for new translations will be sent to
the debian-i18n mailing list.

Both these calls for translations will request updates to be sent as
individual bug reports. That will probably trigger a lot of bug
reports against your package, but these should be easier to deal with.

The call for translation updates and new translations will run until
Thursday, July 26, 2007. Please avoid uploading a package with fixed or changed
debconf templates and/or translation updates in the meantime. Of
course, other changes are safe.

On Friday, July 27, 2007, I will contact you again and will send a final patch
summarizing all the updates (changes to debconf templates,
updates to debconf translations and new debconf translations).

Again, thanks for your attention and cooperation.


-- System Information:
Debian Release: lenny/sid
  APT prefers unstable
  APT policy: (500, 'unstable'), (1, 'experimental')
Architecture: i386 (i686)

Kernel: Linux 2.6.21-1-686 (SMP w/1 CPU core)
Locale: LANG=C, LC_CTYPE=C (charmap=ANSI_X3.4-1968)
Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/dash
--- dibbler.old/debian/dibbler-client.templates 2007-06-21 10:27:47.137955020 
+0200
+++ dibbler/debian/dibbler-client.templates     2007-07-11 09:12:06.316596951 
+0200
@@ -1,3 +1,12 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# [EMAIL PROTECTED] for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: dibbler-client/title
 Type: title
 _Description: dibbler-client: DHCPv6 client
@@ -5,10 +14,11 @@
 Template: dibbler-client/start
 Type: boolean
 Default: true
-_Description: Do you want dibbler-client to start when system starts?
- Dibbler client can be configured to start at boot, so your host will have
- IPv6 set up after boot. This is generally a good idea. Make sure that
- there is a DHCPv6 server available in your network.
+_Description: Should the Dibbler client be launched when the system starts?
+ The Dibbler client can be configured to be launched when the system
+ is started. If you choose this option, this host will have a correct
+ IPv6 setup after booting. Please ensure that a DHCPv6 server is
+ available on the network.
 
 Template: dibbler-client/interfaces
 Type: string
@@ -21,8 +31,8 @@
 
 Template: dibbler-client/options
 Type: multiselect
-_Choices: dns, domain
+__Choices: dns, domain
 Default: dns
-_Description: What additional parameters should be obtained:
- The Dibbler client can request that the DHCPv6 server supply additional
+_Description: Additional parameters to obtain:
+ The Dibbler client can request that the DHCPv6 server supplies additional
  configuration parameters.
--- dibbler.old/debian/dibbler-relay.templates  2007-06-21 10:27:47.137955020 
+0200
+++ dibbler/debian/dibbler-relay.templates      2007-07-11 09:12:16.316147810 
+0200
@@ -1,3 +1,12 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# [EMAIL PROTECTED] for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: dibbler-relay/title
 Type: title
 _Description: dibbler-relay: DHCPv6 relay
@@ -5,12 +14,8 @@
 Template: dibbler-relay/start
 Type: boolean
 Default: true
-_Description: Do you want dibbler-relay to start when the system starts?
- Dibbler relay can be configured to start at boot. This node will then
- forward DHCPv6 messages between clients, servers and other relays.
+_Description: Should the Dibbler relay be launched when the system starts?
+ The Dibbler relay can be configured to be launched when the system is
+ started. If you choose this option, this node will forward
+ DHCPv6 messages between clients, servers and other relays.
 
-Template: dibbler-relay/config
-Type: note
-_Description: Modify /etc/dibbler/relay.conf before running the relay
- Without proper modifications, the relay will most likely refuse to start
- or will not forward DHCPv6 messages as expected.
--- dibbler.old/debian/dibbler-server.templates 2007-06-21 10:27:47.137955020 
+0200
+++ dibbler/debian/dibbler-server.templates     2007-07-11 09:12:21.315923240 
+0200
@@ -1,3 +1,12 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# [EMAIL PROTECTED] for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: dibbler-server/title
 Type: title
 _Description: dibbler-server: DHCPv6 server
@@ -5,13 +14,9 @@
 Template: dibbler-server/start
 Type: boolean
 Default: true
-_Description: Do you want dibbler-server to start when the system starts?
- Dibbler server can be configured to start at boot. This node will then act
- as a DHCPv6 server. It will provide IPv6 addresses and additional
+_Description: Should the Dibbler server be launched when the system starts?
+ The Dibbler server can be configured to be launched when the system
+ is started. If you choose this option, this node will act as a
+ DHCPv6 server. It will provide IPv6 addresses and additional
  configuration options to other nodes in the network.
 
-Template: dibbler-server/config
-Type: note
-_Description: Modify /etc/dibbler/server.conf before running the server
- Without proper modifications, the Dibbler server will most likely offer
- invalid addresses and options when started.
--- dibbler.old/debian/control  2007-06-21 10:27:47.137955020 +0200
+++ dibbler/debian/control      2007-07-11 09:12:46.314800389 +0200
@@ -11,10 +11,11 @@
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, debconf (>= 1.3.22)
 Recommends: dibbler-doc
 Description: portable DHCPv6 server
- This is a DHCPv6 server. It supports both stateful (i.e. IPv6 address 
- granting) as well as stateless (i.e. options granting) autoconfiguration 
- modes of DHCPv6 protocol. Relays are also supported. This package allows
- IPv6 hosts to be automatically configured in your network.
+ The Dibbler server supports both stateful (i.e. IPv6 address
+ granting) as well as stateless (i.e. options granting)
+ auto-configuration modes of the DHCPv6 protocol. Relays are also
+ supported. This package allows IPv6 hosts to be automatically
+ configured on the network.
  .
   Homepage: http://klub.com.pl/dhcpv6/
  
@@ -23,11 +24,12 @@
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, debconf (>= 1.3.22), ucf
 Recommends: dibbler-doc
 Description: portable DHCPv6 client
- This is a DHCPv6 client. It supports both stateful (i.e. IPv6 address
- granting) as well as stateless (i.e. option granting) autoconfiguration
- modes of the DHCPv6 protocol. Besides basic capabilities, it supports
- various DHCPv6 extensions, e.g. option renewal. Install Dibbler client if
- this host should obtain IPv6 addresses and options from a DHCPv6 server.
+ The Dibbler client supports both stateful (i.e. IPv6 address
+ granting) as well as stateless (i.e. option granting)
+ auto-configuration modes of the DHCPv6 protocol. Besides basic
+ capabilities, it supports various DHCPv6 extensions, for instance
+ option renewal. Installing Dibbler allows obtaining IPv6 addresses and
+ options from a DHCPv6 server.
  .
   Homepage: http://klub.com.pl/dhcpv6/
 
@@ -36,10 +38,10 @@
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, debconf (>= 1.3.22)
 Recommends: dibbler-doc
 Description: portable DHCPv6 relay
- This is a DHCPv6 relay. Relays are used as proxies between servers and
- clients. Their main advantage is the ability to support multiple remote 
- links using only one server. Install Dibbler relay if you want to serve 
- multiple not physically connected links with one DHCPv6 server.
+ Relays are used as proxies between servers and clients. Their main
+ advantage is the ability to support multiple remote links using only
+ one server. Installing Dibbler relay allows serving multiple, not
+ physically connected, links with one DHCPv6 server.
  .
   Homepage: http://klub.com.pl/dhcpv6/
 
@@ -48,11 +50,11 @@
 Section: doc
 Depends:
 Suggests: dibbler-server, dibbler-client, dibbler-relay
-Description: documentation for dibbler
+Description: documentation for Dibbler
  This package includes both user and developer documentation, covering all
- acpects of the Dibbler DHCPv6 implementation:
-  - server, client and relay usage and configuration
-  - various tips and frequently asked questions
-  - internal structure/code description and hints for developers
+ aspects of the Dibbler DHCPv6 implementation:
+  - server, client and relay usage and configuration;
+  - various tips and frequently asked questions;
+  - internal structure/code description and hints for developers.
  .
   Homepage: http://klub.com.pl/dhcpv6/

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