Package: fai Severity: minor Tags: patch
Here is a patch for some minor English mistakes I noticed throughout FAI. Diego -- System Information: Debian Release: 4.0 APT prefers unstable APT policy: (500, 'unstable') Architecture: powerpc (ppc) Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/bash Kernel: Linux 2.6.21 Locale: LANG=en_US.UTF-8, LC_CTYPE=en_US.UTF-8 (charmap=UTF-8)
Index: conf/sources.list =================================================================== --- conf/sources.list (revision 4347) +++ conf/sources.list (working copy) @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ # These lines should work for many sites -# A more comprehensive example can be found in /usr/share/doc/fai/examples/etc +# A more comprehensive example is at /usr/share/doc/fai-doc/examples/etc deb http://ftp.debian.org/debian etch main contrib non-free #deb http://ftp.debian.org/debian etch-proposed-updates main contrib non-free Index: man/fai-chboot.8 =================================================================== --- man/fai-chboot.8 (revision 4347) +++ man/fai-chboot.8 (working copy) @@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ verbose,sshd,createvt .TP .B \-h -Show simle help and version. +Show simple help and version. .TP .B \-i Set parameters for booting the FAI install kernel. Same as -k "ip=dhcp" vmlinuz-install /dev/nfs. This does not set FAI_ACTION. @@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ .B \-I Same as -i but also sets FAI_ACTION=install. So a fully automatic installation will be performed. ATTENTION! This will erase most of the -data on the install clients local disks. +data on the local disks of the install clients. .TP .BI "\-k " parameters Set kernel append parameters. Index: man/install_packages.8 =================================================================== --- man/install_packages.8 (revision 4347) +++ man/install_packages.8 (working copy) @@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ remove, or purge packages or tasks. install_packages is called from the custom fai_rcS script and should not be -called directly. It's function is to parse the package_config files based on +called directly. Its function is to parse the package_config files based on the class definitions of the client. For example, if the client belonged to the SMTPSERVER class, install_packages would parse ../package_config/SMTPSERVER for instructions on what packages to install, hold, remove, or purge. Index: examples/simple/class/FAIBASE.var =================================================================== --- examples/simple/class/FAIBASE.var (revision 4347) +++ examples/simple/class/FAIBASE.var (working copy) @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ # default values for installation. You can override them in your *.var files -# allow installation of pacakges from unsigned repositories +# allow installation of packages from unsigned repositories FAI_ALLOW_UNSIGNED=1 CONSOLEFONT= @@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ # pw is "fai" ROOTPW='$1$kBnWcO.E$djxB128U7dMkrltJHPf6d1' -# moduleslist contains modules that will be loaded by the new system, +# MODULESLIST contains modules that will be loaded by the new system, # not during installation these modules will be written to /etc/modules # If you need a module during installation, add it to $kernelmodules # in 20-hwdetect.source. But discover should do most of this job Index: examples/simple/class/10-base-classes =================================================================== --- examples/simple/class/10-base-classes (revision 4347) +++ examples/simple/class/10-base-classes (working copy) @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ #! /bin/bash -# echo architecture and OS name in upper case. Do NOT remove these two lines +# Echo architecture and OS name in uppercase. Do NOT remove these two lines. uname -s | tr '[:lower:]' '[:upper:]' [ -x "`which dpkg`" ] && dpkg --print-installation-architecture | tr a-z A-Z Index: examples/simple/class/20-hwdetect.source =================================================================== --- examples/simple/class/20-hwdetect.source (revision 4347) +++ examples/simple/class/20-hwdetect.source (working copy) @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ # (c) Thomas Lange, 2002-2005, [EMAIL PROTECTED] -# NOTE: Files named *.source will be evaluated, but their output ignored and instead +# NOTE: Files named *.source will be evaluated, but their output ignored. Instead # the contents of $newclasses will be added to the list of defined classes. echo 0 > /proc/sys/kernel/printk @@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ for i in $mod; do modprobe $i 1>/dev/null 2>&1 done -# Booting from CD does not enable dma always +# Booting from CD does not always enable DMA. for d in $( echo /proc/ide/hd[a-z] 2>/dev/null); do [ -d $d ] && echo "using_dma:1" > $d/settings done @@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ # let discover do most of the job [ -x /sbin/discover-modprobe ] && /sbin/discover-modprobe -# now we can mount the usb file system +# now we can mount the USB filesystem mount -t usbfs usbfs /proc/bus/usb modprobe -a sd_mod sr_mod @@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ echo 6 > /proc/sys/kernel/printk # try to detect graphics card -# the variable VIDEODRIVER may be used to generate the XF86config file +# the variable VIDEODRIVER may be used to generate the xorg.conf file [ -x "$(which discover)" ] && { if discover --version | grep "discover \(version \)*1\." ; then VIDEODRIVER=$(discover --xdriver video 2> /dev/null)
