On Tue, Feb 21, 2023, 3:12 PM Ryan Kavanagh <r...@debian.org> wrote:

> On Sun, Feb 19, 2023 at 09:01:56AM -0700, Scarlett Moore wrote:
> >   Description     : A tool for glamourous shell scripts
> >
> > A tool for glamorous shell scripts. Leverage the power of Bubbles and
> > Lip Gloss in your scripts and aliases without writing any Go code!
>
> This long description does not provide users with enough information to
> understand what the package does. What are "Bubbles" and "Lip Gloss" in
> a shell script? What is a "glamourous shell script"?
>
> It would be helpful if the package's long description satisfied ยง3.4.2
> of the Debian Policy Manual [0]:
>
>     The description field needs to make sense to anyone, even people who
>     have no idea about any of the things the package deals with. [3]
>
>     [...]
>
>     [3] The blurb that comes with a program in its announcements and/or
>     README files is rarely suitable for use in a description. It is
>     usually aimed at people who are already in the community where the
>     package is used.
>
> Best wishes,
> Ryan
>
> [0]
> https://www.debian.org/doc/debian-policy/ch-binary.html#the-extended-description
>
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Yes sorry. I will update this description to a much more useful description
tomorrow.
Thanks,
Scarlett

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