control: tag -1 +moreinfo control: owner -1 ! Dear David,
Thank you for your work to bring this new package to Debian! I can't sponsor the upload, but I hope this review is useful to you. I've split it into two sections: things that I would consider must-fixes before an upload to Debian, and suggested improvements. The latter aren't strictly necessary, but they would help demonstrate to a potential sponsor that you are committed to maintaining this package in Debian. Must-fixes/clarifications: 1. The changelog should contain exactly one entry, closing the ITP. The current changelog suggests that 4pane has already been uploaded to Debian. 2. Why doesn't 4pane work on archs other than i386, amd64, hurd-i386? (an eclectic list!) 3. The Vcs-* fields should point to a repo/branch containing the source package, not the upstream master branch. 4. I think that it would be clearer to express the wxWindows license as a dual-license: "GPL-2+ or wxWindows", with separate license paragraphs for each of those. Suggestions: 1. I'd be very grateful if you'd put this source package in a git repository. That way, I can use `git diff` to review changes that you've made in response to my comments. 2. At least PACKAGERS, README are missing a trailing newline. 3. The "but may be used by others" line in the manpage doesn't make much sense. Normally this is used to indicate that a manpage written by a Debian contributor is used in a Debian derivative, but of course any copy of a manpage written by *upstream* gets used by others. 4. Why is there an additional copy of the manpage in the debian/ subdir? 5. "As well as standard file manager things" I would suggest s/things/functionality/. Also, the scare quotes around 'terminal emulator', 'grep' etc. aren't needed and could be confusing. 6. Can Vcs-Git: use a secure protocol? https:// rather than git://. 7. The debian/* paragraph in d/copyright is redundant. 8. The Debian menu system is deprecated. You seem to be installing a FreeDesktop.org desktop file into /usr/share/4Pane/rc. Please install that as a desktop file that will be picked up by desktop environments -- see Debian Policy 9.6. 9. I think the html docs should go in /usr/share/doc/4pane/html. Then someone just looking for the changelog, README etc. need not hunt through the html files. 10. You're inconsistent about 4pane versus 4Pane. For example, you use /usr/share/4Pane but /usr/share/doc/4pane (with 4Pane as a symlink). Since the package is 4pane, you should use '4pane' in all directories the package uses (the compatibility symlinks from 4Pane to 4pane are fine). 11. I'm not familiar with wxWidgets practices, but is it unavoidable to include sections of code from the wxWidgets sources, as you describe in LICENSE? Is it not possible to call library functions instead? Since you link against libwxgtk I assume that it isn't possible to replace the copied code with library calls, but I'd appreciate it if you could confirm that. 12. Please consider using dh_autoreconf to ensure that the package's build system can be reproduced from the source code provided I haven't tried installing and running the package yet, but hopefully the above is enough to be going on with. -- Sean Whitton
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