Dear Debian maintainer,

On Tuesday, May 26, 2015, I sent you a notification about the beginning of a 
review
action on debconf templates for neurodebian.

Then, I sent you a bug report with rewritten templates and announcing
the beginning of the second phase of this action: call for translation
updates.

Translators have been working hard and here is now the result of their efforts.

Please consider using it EVEN if you committed files to your
development tree as long as they were reported.

The attached tarball contains:

- debian/changelog with the list of changes
- debian/control with rewrites of packages' descriptions
- debian/<templates> with all the rewritten templates file(s)
- debian/po/*.po with all PO files (existing ones and new ones)

As said, please use *at least* the PO files as provided here,
preferrably over those sent by translators in their bug reports. All
of them have been checked and reformatted. In some cases, formatting
errors have been corrected.

The patch.rfr file contains a patch for the templates and control
file(s) alone.

Please note that this patch applies to the templates and control
file(s) of your package as of Tuesday, May 26, 2015. If your package was updated
in the meantime, I may have updated my reference copy....but I also
may have missed that. This is indeed why I suggested you do not
modified such files while the review process was running,
remember..:-)

It is now safe to upload a new package version with these changes.

Please notify me of your intents with regards to this. 

There is of course no hurry to update your package but feel free to
contact me in case you would need sponsoring or any other action to
fix this.



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--- neurodebian.old/debian/neurodebian.templates        2015-05-21 
21:14:37.627014717 +0200
+++ neurodebian/debian/neurodebian.templates    2015-06-23 14:57:27.128604119 
+0200
@@ -1,3 +1,12 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# [email protected] for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: neurodebian/title
 Type: title
 _Description: NeuroDebian APT repository installer
@@ -5,26 +14,30 @@
 Template: neurodebian/enable
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
-_Description: Should NeuroDebian repository be enabled?
- NeuroDebian project provides a separate APT repository with backport
- builds of most recent releases of maintained software, datasets and
- some software not in Debian proper yet.  Enabling this additional
- repository will make those packages available on your base system.
- .
- Note: although NeuroDebian team aims to assure robust and correct
- operation of provided packages, enabling this additional archive
- might compromise the integrity of your base system.
+_Description: Enable the NeuroDebian package repository?
+ The NeuroDebian project provides a separate APT repository with
+ software that is not available in Debian, including datasets and
+ backported new releases.
+ .
+ If you choose this option, these packages will be available for
+ installation and upgrades.
+ .
+ Even though these packages are closely maintained
+ by the NeuroDebian team, enabling this additional archive
+ may compromise the integrity of the system.
 
 Template: neurodebian/release
 Type: select
-Choices: auto, ${releases}
+__Choices: automatic, ${releases}
+Choices-C: auto, ${releases}
 Default: auto
 _Description: Release name of the base system:
- Specify for which Debian or Ubuntu release (e.g. wheezy or trusty).
+ Please specify the appropriate Debian or Ubuntu release codename
+ (for instance "stretch" or "trusty").
  .
- If 'auto', Debian or Ubuntu release name will be '${release}' as
- deduced from the output of apt-cache policy.  If the release of your
- system is not '${release}' -- please choose specific one which
+ If this is set to "automatic"', the release name is chosen according
+ to the output of "apt-cache policy". If the release name for this
+ system is not "${release}", you should choose the specific one which
  matches best.
 
 
@@ -33,16 +46,16 @@
 Choices: origin, best, custom, ${mirrors}
 Default: best
 _Description: NeuroDebian mirror to use:
- NeuroDebian project has a number of community-maintainer mirrors
+ The NeuroDebian project has a number of community-maintained mirrors
  around the globe.
  .
- If you do not know which mirror URL to choose, select among
+ If you do not know which mirror URL to choose, select one of:
  .
-  - origin: original NeuroDebian repository
-  - best: will try to use netselect to select "closest" mirror.
-    Depending on the configuration of the firewall, and actual mirror
-    setup, might fail to select actually closest one.  If netselect
-    is not available, default mirror (possibly 'origin') will be used.
+  * origin: the original NeuroDebian repository;
+  * best: will try to use netselect to select the "closest" mirror.
+    This may fail depending on the current mirror setup and the
+    configuration of the firewall. If netselect is not available, the
+    default mirror will be used.
 
 
 Template: neurodebian/flavor
@@ -50,69 +63,75 @@
 Choices: auto, libre, full
 Default: auto
 _Description: NeuroDebian flavor to use:
- NeuroDebian project adheres to Debian Free Software Guidelines and
- has three areas of the archive in all suites/releases:
+ The NeuroDebian project adheres to the Debian Free Software Guidelines,
+ and offers three packages areas, classified by license, for all
+ suites/releases:
  .
   libre
-    only the DFSG-compliant materials
+    DFSG-compliant material only
   full
     all three areas (main, contrib, non-free)
   auto
-    according to output of apt-cache policy '${flavor}' will be used.
-    If that is not the flavor you need, select manually another one.
+    picked from the output of "apt-cache policy"
+    (for this machine: "${flavor}").
 
 Template: neurodebian/components
 Type: multiselect
 Choices: software, data, devel
 Default: software, data
 _Description: NeuroDebian repository components to enable:
- NeuroDebian repository provides
+ NeuroDebian repository provides three different sets of packages:
  .
   software
-   Packages containing software packages, often backports of stable
-   software releases for previous Debian/Ubuntu releases
+   Packages containing software, often backports of stable software
+   releases for previous Debian/Ubuntu releases;
   devel
-   Additional "bleeding edge" software packages, which might not be a
-   good fit for being enabled by default. (Similar to Debian
-   experimental)
+   Additional "bleeding edge" software packages (like those in Debian
+   experimental), which it may not be safe to enable by default.
   data
-   Packages containing data (e.g. atlases, sample datasets), often
-   required by software packages.  Should generally be enabled.
+   Packages containing data (such as atlases or sample datasets), often
+   required by other packages. This should usually be enabled.
 
 
 Template: neurodebian/overwrite
 Type: boolean
 Default: true
-_Description: Should existing NeuroDebian APT file be overridden?
- If not allowed, configuration would fail if there is
- an existing apt configuration file for the NeuroDebian.
+_Description: Overwrite the existing NeuroDebian APT file?
+ If an APT sources.list file already exists for NeuroDebian, this
+ package will fail to configure unless given permission to overwrite it.
 
 Template: neurodebian/suffix
 Type: string
 Default:
 _Description: Additional suffix for the NeuroDebian APT file name:
- For instance if you would like to enable additional repository
- (e.g. NeuroDebian devel) or release, without interfering with the
- main/default configuration file.  Generally should be left empty.
+ Adding a suffix makes it possible to enable an additional repository
+ (such as NeuroDebian devel) or release, without interfering with the
+ main NeuroDebian sources list.
+ .
+ It should usually be left empty.
 
 Template: neurodebian/run-update-note
 Type: note
-_Description: APT list of packages needs to be updated
- For the installed (or removed) NeuroDebian APT configuration to take
- an effect, list of packages needs to be updated.  This needs to be
- done "manually" (e.g., via apt-get update) upon completion of
- installation or reconfiguration of the neurodebian package.
+_Description: APT update required
+ For the installation (or removal) of a NeuroDebian sources.list file
+ to take effect, APT's packages list needs to be updated. Please
+ manually run "apt-get update" after the neurodebian package has been
+ installed or reconfigured.
 
 Template: neurodebian/netselect-not-found
 Type: error
-_Description: netselect tool was not found!
- Please install netselect tool first (apt-get install netselect) or
- choose a specific mirror.
+_Description: Missing netselect tool
+ The "netselect" utility was not found. You probably need to
+ install the netselect package.
+ .
+ Alternatively, you can manually select the mirror to use.
 
 Template: neurodebian/netselect-cannot-be-used
 Type: error
-_Description: netselect tool was not found (no other mirror)!
- Please install netselect tool first (apt-get install netselect)
- before installing/configuring this package, or run with a lower
- DEBIAN_PRIORITY to choose a specific mirror.
-
+_Description: Missing netselect tool
+ The "netselect" utility was not found. You probably need to
+ install the netselect package.
+ .
+ Unless this package is installed, the NeuroDebian mirror to use has
+ to be chosen manually. To be prompted with the relevant question, you
+ can run "dpkg-reconfigure -plow neurodebian".
--- neurodebian.old/debian/control      2015-05-21 21:14:37.627014717 +0200
+++ neurodebian/debian/control  2015-06-08 16:20:21.528826554 +0200
@@ -14,13 +14,13 @@
 Depends: python, wget, neurodebian-archive-keyring, ${misc:Depends}
 Recommends: netselect
 Suggests: neurodebian-desktop, neurodebian-popularity-contest
-Description: turnkey platform for the neuroscience
- The NeuroDebian project integrates and maintain a variety of
- neuroscience-oriented (such as AFNI, FSL, PsychoPy, etc.) and many
- generic computational (such as condor, pandas, etc.) software projects
- within Debian.
+Description: neuroscience-oriented distribution - repository configuration
+ The NeuroDebian project integrates and maintains a variety of software
+ projects within Debian that are useful for neuroscience (such as AFNI,
+ FSL, PsychoPy, etc.) or generic computation (such as HTCondor,
+ pandas, etc.).
  .
- This package enables NeuroDebian repository on top of the stock
+ This package enables the NeuroDebian repository on top of a standard
  Debian or Ubuntu system.
 
 
@@ -29,8 +29,13 @@
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}, devscripts, cowbuilder, neurodebian-archive-keyring
 Recommends: python, zerofree, moreutils, time, ubuntu-keyring, 
debian-archive-keyring, apt-utils
 Suggests: virtualbox-ose, virtualbox-ose-fuse
-Description: NeuroDebian development tools
- neuro.debian.net sphinx website sources and development tools used by
+Description: neuroscience-oriented distribution - development tools
+ The NeuroDebian project integrates and maintains a variety of software
+ projects within Debian that are useful for neuroscience (such as AFNI,
+ FSL, PsychoPy, etc.) or generic computation (such as HTCondor,
+ pandas, etc.).
+ .
+ This package provides sources and development tools used by
  NeuroDebian to provide backports for a range of Debian/Ubuntu
  releases.
 
@@ -40,10 +45,15 @@
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}, ssh-askpass-gnome | ssh-askpass, desktop-base, 
gnome-icon-theme,
          neurodebian-popularity-contest
 Suggests:
-Description: neuroscience research environment
- This package contains NeuroDebian artwork (icons, background image)
- and a NeuroDebian menu featuring most popular neuroscience tools
- automatically installed upon initial invocation.
+Description: neuroscience-oriented distribution - desktop integration
+ The NeuroDebian project integrates and maintains a variety of software
+ projects within Debian that are useful for neuroscience (such as AFNI,
+ FSL, PsychoPy, etc.) or generic computation (such as HTCondor,
+ pandas, etc.).
+ .
+ This package provides NeuroDebian artwork (icons, background image)
+ and a NeuroDebian menu featuring the most popular neuroscience tools,
+ which will be automatically installed upon initial invocation.
 
 
 Package: neurodebian-archive-keyring
@@ -51,29 +61,37 @@
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}
 Replaces: neurodebian-keyring (<< 0.34~)
 Breaks: neurodebian-keyring (<< 0.34~)
-Description: GnuPG archive keys of the NeuroDebian archive
+Description: neuroscience-oriented distribution - GnuPG archive keys
+ The NeuroDebian project integrates and maintains a variety of software
+ projects within Debian that are useful for neuroscience (such as AFNI,
+ FSL, PsychoPy, etc.) or generic computation (such as HTCondor,
+ pandas, etc.).
+ .
  The NeuroDebian project digitally signs its Release files. This package
  contains the archive keys used for that.
 
 Package: neurodebian-popularity-contest
 Architecture: all
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}, popularity-contest
-Description: Helper for NeuroDebian popularity contest submissions
+Description: neuroscience-oriented distribution - popcon integration
+ The NeuroDebian project integrates and maintains a variety of software
+ projects within Debian that are useful for neuroscience (such as AFNI,
+ FSL, PsychoPy, etc.) or generic computation (such as HTCondor,
+ pandas, etc.).
+ .
  This package is a complement to the generic popularity-contest
  package to enable anonymous submission of usage statistics to
  NeuroDebian in addition to the popcon submissions to the underlying
- distribution (e.g. Debian or Ubuntu) popcon server.
+ distribution (either Debian or Ubuntu) popcon server.
  .
- Your participation in popcon is important for following reasons:
-  - Popular packages receive more attention from developers, bugs are
+ Participating in popcon is important for the following reasons:
+  * Popular packages receive more attention from developers; bugs are
     fixed faster and updates are provided quicker.
-  - Assure that we do not drop support for a previous release of Debian
-    or Ubuntu while are active users.
-  - User statistics could be used by upstream research software
-    developers to acquire funding for continued development.
- .
- It has an effect only if you have decided to participate in the
- Popularity Contest of your distribution, i.e. Debian or Ubuntu.
- You can always enable or disable your participation in popcon by
- running 'dpkg-reconfigure popularity-contest' as root.
-
+  * It ensures that support is not dropped for a previous release of
+    Debian or Ubuntu while there are active users.
+  * User statistics may be useful for upstream research software
+    developers seeking funding for continued development.
+ .
+ This requires that popcon is activated for the underlying distribution
+ (Debian or Ubuntu), which can be achieved by running
+ "dpkg-reconfigure popularity-contest" as root.
--- neurodebian.old/debian/changelog    2015-05-21 21:14:37.627014717 +0200
+++ neurodebian/debian/changelog        2015-07-07 19:05:52.001945563 +0200
@@ -1,3 +1,18 @@
+neurodebian (0.35) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
+
+  * Debconf templates and debian/control reviewed by the debian-l10n-
+    english team as part of the Smith review project. Closes: #786448
+  * [Debconf translation updates]
+  * Czech (Michal Simunek).  Closes: #789695
+  * Danish (Joe Hansen).  Closes: #790342
+  * German (Chris Leick).  Closes: #790489
+  * Brazilian Portuguese (Adriano Rafael Gomes).  Closes: #791471
+  * Portuguese (Américo Monteiro).  Closes: #791547
+  * French (Julien Patriarca).  Closes: #791559
+  * Russian (Yuri Kozlov).  Closes: #791654
+
+ -- Christian Perrier <[email protected]>  Fri, 22 May 2015 06:49:37 +0200
+
 neurodebian (0.34) unstable; urgency=medium
 
   * Re-upload to Debian proper (Closes: #757279), addressing Debian

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