Package: dolibarr
Version: 3.5.4+dfsg2-1
Severity: minor

The extended description ends with:
You can also add third parties external modules or develop yours.

"third parties external modules" should either read something like "external modules from 
third parties" or "third-party external modules".


By the way, there is something inconsistent in the list. If the items are presented as examples, 
the last item shouldn't say "And a lot more modules". Either the presentation should just 
say "Dolibarr offers the following modules" or the last item should be removed.

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Filipus Klutiero
http://www.philippecloutier.com


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