Package: debian-reference
Severity: wishlist
Tags: patch
Hi Osamu,
[sending this to the BTS, since I got no reaction from you yet,
so that it doesn't get lost.]
I noticed some glitches in the recent changings in DR.
Please find some diffs for the files in asciidoc attached.
I have marked the changes like this.
^^^^
One change fixes a build error due to changed entity name.
Greetings
Holger
--- 02_package.txt 2014-07-06 01:13:48.846830856 +0200
+++ 02_package_workingcopy.txt 2014-07-06 22:36:23.368211390 +0200
@@ -370,7 +370,7 @@
- The `aptitude` command sometimes suggests mass package removals for the
system upgrade on the `testing` or `unstable` Debian system.
- This situation has frightened many system administrators. Don't panic.
- This seems to be caused mostly by the version skew among packages depended
or recommended by a meta-package such as `gnome-core`.
- - This can be resolved by selecting "Cancel pending actions" in the
`aptitude` command menu, existing it, and using "`apt-get dist-upgrade`".
+ - This can be resolved by selecting "Cancel pending actions" in the
`aptitude` command menu, exiting aptitude, and using "`apt-get dist-upgrade`".
^^^^^^^^
The `apt-get` and `apt-cache` commands are the most **basic** APT-based
package management tools.
--- 04_auth.txt 2014-07-06 01:13:48.850830879 +0200
+++ 04_auth_workingcopy.txt 2014-07-07 23:29:33.524934967 +0200
@@ -323,7 +323,7 @@
The http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Secure_Shell[Secure Shell (SSH)] program
provides secure encrypted communications between two untrusted hosts over an
insecure network with the secure authentication. It consists of the
http://www.openssh.org/[OpenSSH] client, `ssh`(1), and the
http://www.openssh.org/[OpenSSH] daemon, `sshd`(8). This SSH can be used to
tunnel an insecure protocol communication such as POP and X securely over the
Internet with the port forwarding feature.
-The client tries to authenticate itself using host-based authentication,
public key authentication, challenge-response authentication, or password
authentication. The use of public key authentication enables the remote
password-less login. See <<_the_remote_access_server_and_utility_ssh>>.
+The client tries to authenticate itself using host-based authentication,
public key authentication, challenge-response authentication, or password
authentication. The use of public key authentication enables the remote
password-less login. See <<_the_remote_access_server_and_utilities_ssh>>.
^^^^
==== Extra security measures for the Internet
--- 08_i18nl10n.txt 2014-07-06 01:13:48.854830893 +0200
+++ 08_i18nl10n_workingcopy.txt 2014-07-06 21:32:25.937182637 +0200
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@
==== The input method support with IBus
-Mltilingual input to the application is processed as:
+Multilingual input to the application is processed as:
^^^
------------------------------
Keyboard Application
--- 09_systips.txt 2014-07-06 21:34:15.229724559 +0200
+++ 09_systips_workingcopy.txt 2014-07-06 21:34:25.949777696 +0200
@@ -1311,7 +1311,7 @@
# wodim -v -eject blank=fast dev=/dev/hda cd.iso
--------------------
-TIP: If your desktop system mounts CD automatically, unmount it by "`sudo
unmount /dev/hda`" from console before using `wodim`(1).
+TIP: If your desktop system mounts CDs automatically, unmount it by "`sudo
umount /dev/hda`" from console before using `wodim`(1).
^^ ^^
==== Mounting the ISO9660 image file
--- 10_datamngt.txt 2014-07-06 01:13:48.858830915 +0200
+++ 10_datamngt_workingcopy.txt 2014-07-06 22:03:32.898440364 +0200
@@ -283,7 +283,7 @@
TIP: The choice of encoding may need to be provided as mount option (see
<<_filename_encoding>>).
-TIP: GUI menu to unmount a filesystem may remove its dynamically generated
device node such as "`/dev/sdc`". If you wish to keep its device node, unmount
it with the `mount`(8) command from the shell prompt.
+TIP: The use of the GUI menu to unmount a filesystem may remove its
dynamically generated device node such as "`/dev/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
sdc`". If you wish to keep its device node, unmount it with the `umount`(8)
command from the shell prompt.
==== Filesystem choice for sharing data
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Holger Wansing <[email protected]>
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