Le mardi 05 mars 2013 à 00:07 +0100, Nicolas Bourdaud a écrit : > Hi Vincent! > > Thanks for spotting the typos. > > You are right that the NOTE section has some words missing... Do you > think the new version is clearer? > > http://anonscm.debian.org/gitweb/?p=pkg-cinnamon/cinnamon.git;a=blob_plain;f=debian/cinnamon-screensaver-lock-dialog.1 > > Cheers, > > Nicolas >
Hey Nicolas, The first part is correct now, however I would replace "Fortunately" in the second sentence by "Therefore". Also why don't you add an author section, something like: .SH AUTHOR .B cinnamon-screensaver-lock-dialog is written by foo <m...@address.com> .P This manual page was written by Nicolas Bourdaud <nicolas.bourd...@gmail.com> As it seems to not exist upstream! Nice day, Vincent -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to debian-bugs-dist-requ...@lists.debian.org with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact listmas...@lists.debian.org
