Package: vavoom
Version: 1.33-3
Severity: minor
The extended description contains:
It needs game data to run, A free game data is available in freedoom
package.
Two propositions can't be separated with a comma. A period (or maybe or
semi-colon) could be used.
By the way, the description also contains:
Vavoom features vlaunch, a graphical launcher.
It would be good to define what a "graphical launcher" is (what does it
launch?).
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