Holger Wansing <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> writes:

> --- en/boot-installer/x86.xml 2008-03-04 20:35:57.000000000 +0100
> +++ en/boot-installer/x86-workingcopy.xml     2008-03-05 21:18:28.000000000 
> +0100
> @@ -202,11 +202,14 @@
>  </para>
>  
>  <para>
> -If the medium is a CD-ROM or DVD-ROM, when you insert it and a 
> pre-installation program
> -should be launched automatically.  In case Windows doesn't start it, or you 
> are using
> +If the medium is a CD-ROM or DVD-ROM, a pre-installation program
> +should be launched automatically when you insert the disc.
> +In case Windows doesn't start it, or you are using
>  a USB Memory Stick medium, you can run it manually by accessing the device 
> and
>  executing <command>setup.exe</command>.
> +</para>
>  
> +<para>
>  When the program is started, it will ask a few preliminary questions and 
> prepare the
>  system to start the installer.
>  </para>

For me, it looks fine. I'm not a good English speaker and then would
like that someone else commit on it but it does clarify the paragraph.

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