On Mon, Feb 25, 2008 at 10:43:39AM -0300, Otavio Salvador wrote: > > ============================================================================== > > --- trunk/manual/en/appendix/preseed.xml (original) > > +++ trunk/manual/en/appendix/preseed.xml Mon Feb 25 12:56:07 2008 > > @@ -37,6 +37,13 @@ > > types of installation and even offers some features not available during > > normal installations. > > > > +</para><para> > > + > > +Preseeding is not required. If you use an empty preseed file, the installer > > +will behave just the same way as in a normal manual installation. Each > > +question you preseed will (if you got it right!) modify the installation in > > +some way from that baseline. > > + > > </para> > > > > <sect2 id="preseed-methods"> > > > > This looks confusing for me. > > What about this: > > Each question you preseed will (if you got it right!) modify the > installation in some way from that baseline however preseeding is not > required. If you use an empty preseed file, the installer will behave > just the same way as in a normal installation.
This reads less well to me than the original; the use of "however" with no preceding punctuation is particularly jarring, but the whole thing is less straightforward and harder to read. What in particular confused you about my text? -- Colin Watson [EMAIL PROTECTED] -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to [EMAIL PROTECTED] with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact [EMAIL PROTECTED]
