OK, here are my edits:
> Template: cdrom-detect/manual_config
> +_Description: Manually select the CD-ROM module and device?
^^^ use 'a' instead of 'the'.
> + No common CD-ROM reader was detected.
> + .
> + Your CD-ROM reader may be an old Mitsumi or another non-IDE, non-SCSI
> + CD-ROM reader. In that case you may choose which module to load and
^^^ should
> + which device to use. If you don't know what module and device are
^^^^^ the ^^^^ which
> + needed, look for some documentation or try a network installation
^
(insert) performing
> + instead of a CD-ROM installation.
> Template: cdrom-detect/is_cd_inserted
> +_Description: Perform manual CD-ROM configuration?
> + Your installation CD-ROM couldn't be mounted.
> + .
> + That probably means that the CD-ROM is not yet inserted. If that's the case,
^^^^ This ^^ has ^ (insert) been ^^ is
> + just insert it and don't perform the manual configuration. The CD-ROM mount
> + will be re-tried.
> + .
> + If your CD-ROM was already in the drive, some other problem happened. You
^^^ is occured ^^^^^^^^
> + should then try the manual CD-ROM configuration.
^^^^ (delete)
> Template: cdrom-detect/cdrom_module
> +_Description: Module needed for accessing the CD-ROM:
> + The automatic detection didn't find any CD-ROM reader. You can try to
^^^ a ^^^^^^ drive
> + load a specific module if you have a specific CD-ROM reader (that is
^^^^^^^^ unusual^^^^^^ drive
> neither IDE nor SCSI).
> Template: cdrom-detect/cdrom_device
> +_Description: Device file for accessing the CD-ROM:
> + In order to get access to your CD-ROM reader, please enter which device file
^^^(delete)^^ the device file that ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
> + should be used. Non-standard CD-ROM readers use non-standard device
> + files (such as /dev/mcdx).
> .
> You may switch to the shell on the second terminal (ALT+F2) to check the
> + available devices in /dev with "ls /dev". You can come back to this screen
^^^^^^^^^ return
> + with ALT+F1.
^^^^ by pressing
> Template: cdrom-detect/success
> +_Description: CD-ROM detected
> + The CD-ROM autodetection was successful. A CD-ROM reader has been found. It
> + currently contains this CD: ${cdname}. The installation process may continue.
The CD-ROM autodetection was successful. A CD-ROM drive has been found
and it currently contains the CD '${cdname}'. The installation will now
continue.
> Template: cdrom-detect/no-cd
> +_Description: No CD detected
> + Please check that a CD has been inserted in the CD-ROM reader.
^^ into ^^^^^^ drive
> Template: cdrom-detect/wrong-cd
> +_Description: Non-Debian CD-ROM detected
> + A CDROM has been detected, but it isn't a Debian CD.
The CD-ROM drive contains a non-debian CD.
> + .
> Please make sure that the correct CD is inserted.
Please insert a Debian CD to continue with the installation.
> Template: cdrom-detect/skip_autodetection
> +_Description: Skip CD-ROM automatic detection?
> + You should skip the CD-ROM automatic detection only if it is causing trouble.
If the CD-ROM automatic detection causes trouble, you may skip this step.
> + If you skip it, a manual intervention will be required to mount the
However, you will need to manually mount the
> + CD-ROM on /cdrom before you can proceed.
> Template: mirror/distribution
> +_Description: Distribution branch to install:
Debian distribution to install:
> + Please select which of the Debian distribution branches you want to install:
^^^^^^^^ (delete) (delete) ^^^^^^^^ ^^^^ wish
> .
> + - woody is the current stable release of Debian;
> + - sarge is the "testing" unreleased version of Debian;
> + - sid is "unstable" and will never be released.
These descriptions will need to be re-written for the release of sarge,
no? Also, shouldn't sarge be the first on the list? The list doesn't
have to (shouldn't) be in chronological order. How about this:
- sarge is the current stable distribution of Debian (3.X)
- sid is the "unstable" distribution and will never be released
- woody is the previous stable distribution of Debian (3.0)
Hope this helps!
Joe
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