Package: floppy-retriever
Severity: normal
Tags: patch d-i

This "polishing" is far from being crucial. It is mostly due to respect the
principles I very recently published as "Writing Debconf Templates Style
Guide" (still opened for discussion).

Comments about the proposed patch :

-_Description: Please insert a driver floppy in the floppy disk drive.
+_Description: Driver floppy insertion
+ Please insert a driver floppy in the floppy disk drive.
+ .

The short desc of notes is more a title than a full phrase.

I thus propose this minor change so that this "title" is not too long.

Anyway, the ending dot is probably to be removed, whatever this proposed
change is adopted.

As I change the short description, I then move the former phrase to the long
description, as a separate paragraph, for improving reading.



-- System Information:
Debian Release: testing/unstable
Architecture: i386
Kernel: Linux mykerinos 2.4.22 #2 Mon Sep 29 15:12:10 CEST 2003 i686
Locale: LANG=fr_FR.UTF-8, LC_CTYPE=fr_FR.UTF-8 (ignored: LC_ALL set to fr_FR.UTF-8)

--- templates.ori       2003-10-29 18:17:28.000000000 +0100
+++ templates   2003-10-29 18:15:10.000000000 +0100
@@ -1,6 +1,8 @@
 Template: retriever/floppy/insert
 Type: note
-_Description: Please insert a driver floppy in the floppy disk drive.
+_Description: Driver floppy insertion
+ Please insert a driver floppy in the floppy disk drive.
+ .
  If you have more than one floppy drive, put the driver floppy in the
  same drive you used for the root floppy in when you booted the installer.
 

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