On 12/10/2019 9:03 PM, Holger Wansing wrote: > Hi, > > Justin B Rye <justin.byam....@gmail.com> wrote: >>> "You may want to switch to the shell on the second terminal (CLTR+ALT+F2 in >>> the " >>> "graphical installer, ALT+F2 for the text-based variant) to check the " >>> "available devices in /dev with \"ls /dev\". You can return to this screen " >>> "by pressing CLTR+ALT+F5 respective ALT+F1." >> ^^^^^^^^^^ >>> >>> >>> Comments? >> >> "Respective" is never ever a conjunction in English. Just say "or". >> >> And it's CTRL, not CLTR. > > > > john doe <johndoe65...@mail.com> wrote: >>> "You may want to switch to the shell on the second terminal (CLTR+ALT+F2 in >>> the " >>> "graphical installer, ALT+F2 for the text-based variant) to check the " >>> "available devices in /dev with \"ls /dev\". You can return to this screen " >>> "by pressing CLTR+ALT+F5 respective ALT+F1." >>> >> >> "> by pressing CLTR+ALT+F5 respective ALT+F1." >> >> At the very least the above line should be: >> >> "by pressing CLTR+ALT+F5 and ALT+F1 respectively." > > > Summarizing your comments into one patch, would this be ok? > > > > diff --git a/debian/cdrom-detect.templates b/debian/cdrom-detect.templates > index 2058b0b..ba50e89 100644 > --- a/debian/cdrom-detect.templates > +++ b/debian/cdrom-detect.templates > @@ -55,9 +55,10 @@ _Description: Device file for accessing the installation > media: > the device file that should be used. Non-standard CD-ROM drives use > non-standard device files (such as /dev/mcdx). > . > - You may switch to the shell on the second terminal (ALT+F2) to check the > + You may want switch to the shell on the second terminal (CTRL+ALT+F2 in the
Should be one or the other: 'You may want to switch to ...' or 'You may switch to ...' The latter seems more appropriate in this context. > + graphical installer, ALT+F2 for the text-based variant) to check the > available devices in /dev with "ls /dev". You can return to this screen > - by pressing ALT+F1. > + by pressing CTRL+ALT+F5 or ALT+F1 respectively. > I would use 'and' instead of 'or' in the above line: 'by pressing CTRL+ALT+F5 and ALT+F1, respectively.' -- John Doe
