On Tue, 2018-07-31 at 11:00 +0200, Holger Wansing wrote: > Hi, > > Ben Hutchings <b...@decadent.org.uk> wrote: [...] > > I agree that this should be changed. However I think that the wording > > "standard versions" also relates to there being unrestricted (standard) > > and non-US versions of some packages. > > > > Perhaps "standard versions" could be changed to something like "the > > &debian; system". > > So, that could look like this: > > > > diff --git a/en/post-install/orientation.xml b/en/post-install/orientation.xml > index 0ec05037f..f3eb00bee 100644 > --- a/en/post-install/orientation.xml > +++ b/en/post-install/orientation.xml > @@ -59,10 +59,13 @@ around this by putting packages on <quote>hold</quote> in > </para><para> > > One of the best installation methods is apt. You can use the command > -line version of <command>apt</command> or full-screen text version > -<application>aptitude</application>. Note apt will also let you merge > -main, contrib, and non-free so you can have export-restricted packages > -as well as standard versions. > +line version of <command>apt</command> as well as tools like > +<application>aptitude</application> or <application>synaptic</application> > +(which are just graphical frontends for <command>apt</command>). > +Note that apt will also let you merge > +main, contrib, and non-free so you can have restricted packages > +(strictly spoken not belonging to &debian;) as well as packages from > +&debian-gnu; at the same time. > > </para> > </sect2>
Looks good to me.
Ben.
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Ben Hutchings
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thought. I realized that a large part of my life from then on was going
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