Hideki Yamane wrote:
> Could you review below messages in deboostrap manpage, please?
Looks good to me.
>
> On Wed, 21 Mar 2018 17:36:07 +0900 Hideki Yamane <henr...@iijmio-mail.jp>
> wrote:
>> Here's a proposed patch for it.
>>
>> diff --git a/debootstrap b/debootstrap
>> index 083473d..1d5d5c6 100755
>> --- a/debootstrap
>> +++ b/debootstrap
>> @@ -550,7 +550,7 @@ fi
>>
>> if [ "$UNPACK_TARBALL" ]; then
>> if [ "${UNPACK_TARBALL#/}" = "$UNPACK_TARBALL" ]; then
>> - error 1 TARPATH "Tarball must be given a complete path"
>> + error 1 TARPATH "Tarball must be given an absolute path"
>> fi
>> if [ "${UNPACK_TARBALL%.tar}" != "$UNPACK_TARBALL" ]; then
>> (cd "$TARGET" && tar -xf "$UNPACK_TARBALL")
>> diff --git a/debootstrap.8 b/debootstrap.8
>> index e802003..699f1fd 100644
>> --- a/debootstrap.8
>> +++ b/debootstrap.8
>> @@ -137,11 +137,12 @@ Don't delete the /debootstrap directory in the target
>> after completing the
>> installation.
>> .IP
>> .IP "\fB\-\-unpack\-tarball=FILE\fP"
>> -Acquire .debs from tarball FILE instead of downloading via http.
>> +Acquire .debs from gzipped tarball FILE (specified with absolute path)
>> +instead of downloading via http.
>> .IP
>> .IP "\fB\-\-make\-tarball=FILE\fP"
>> -Instead of bootstrapping, make a tarball (written to FILE) of the downloaded
>> -packages.
>> +Instead of bootstrapping, make a gzipped tarball (written to FILE) of the
>> +downloaded packages.
>> The resulting tarball may be passed to a later
>> .BR \-\-unpack\-tarball .
>> .IP
If I was doing a pedantic review of every bit of debootstrap's
documentation and output I'd suggest replacing "http(s)" with
"HTTP(S)" throughout, but there's no point doing that just here.
--
JBR with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package
