Cyril Brulebois <k...@debian.org> writes:

> Brian Potkin <claremont...@gmail.com> (26/12/2012):
>> I originally submitted this patch in
>> 
>>    http://lists.debian.org/debian-boot/2012/10/msg00444.html
>> 
>> Mentions of "volatile" remain in Section B.4.9.
>
> Oops, thanks for insisting. :)
>
> I'm adding debian-release@ to the loop.
>
>> --- manual/en/using-d-i/modules/apt-setup.xml        2012-10-21 
>> 15:52:12.582381910 +0100
>> +++ manual/en/using-d-i/modules/apt-setup_volatile.xml       2012-10-21 
>> 16:05:53.000000000 +0100
>> @@ -42,16 +42,28 @@
>>  method you are using and possibly using choices made earlier in the
>>  installation. In most cases the installer will automatically add a security
>>  mirror and, if you are installing the stable distribution, a mirror for the
>> -<quote>volatile</quote> update service.
>> +<quote>release updates</quote> service.
>>  
>>  </para><para>
>>  
>>  If you are installing at a lower priority (e.g. in expert mode), you will
>>  be able to make more decisions yourself. You can choose whether or not to
>> -use the security and/or volatile update services, and you can choose to
>> +use the security and/or release updates services, and you can choose to
>>  add packages from the <quote>contrib</quote> and <quote>non-free</quote>
>>  sections of the archive.
>>  
>> +</para><para>
>> +
>> +Security updates help to keep your system secured against attacks.
>
> “help keep” I think?

"help keeping" I'd say, but I'm not a native speaker either.

Gaudenz

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