On Sat 13 Oct 2012 at 18:35:44 +0100, Brian Potkin wrote: > On Sat 13 Oct 2012 at 18:25:17 +0100, Brian Potkin wrote: > > > I have attached four patches which hopefully remove any occurances > > of businesscard/business card in the Manual. > > I forgot to say that removing the word "businesscard" from pkgsel.xml > turned the paragraph into nonsense. So I rewote it.
This remark should have referred to installation-howto.xml, which I negelected to send. It is attached to this mail.
--- manual/en/howto/installation-howto.xml 2012-10-16 18:40:08.362210171 +0100 +++ manual/en/howto/installation-howto-new.xml 2012-10-13 16:16:43.000000000 +0100 @@ -66,16 +66,13 @@ <para> -There are two different netinst CD images which can be used to install -&releasename; with the &d-i;. These images are intended to boot from CD -and install additional packages over a network, hence the name 'netinst'. -The difference between the two images is that on the full netinst image -the base packages are included, whereas you have to download these from -the web if you are using the business card image. If you'd rather, you can -get a full size CD image which will not need the network to install. You -only need the first CD of the set. - -</para><para> +The netinst CD image is a popular image which can be used to install +&releasename; with the &d-i;. This image is intended to boot from CD and +install additional packages over a network; hence the name 'netinst'. +The image has the software components needed to run the installer and +the base packages to provide a minimal &releasename; system. If you'd +rather, you can get a full size CD image which will not need the network +to install. You only need the first CD of the set. </para><para> Download whichever type you prefer and burn it to a CD. <phrase arch="any-x86">To boot the CD, you may need to change your BIOS