Christian PERRIER wrote:
> Quoting Robert Millan (r...@debian.org):
>> Please see:
>>
>> http://anonscm.debian.org/gitweb/?p=d-i/partman-zfs.git;a=commitdiff;h=dc5406791a0685a3be3daf1a226462d09de2b7cf#patch13
>
> I made a few corrections. Please see
> bb075983e0c60e1c5375c4df995428f8f6897114. However, given the length of
> these changes, I'd prefer debian-l10n-english to also have a look at
> these templates. Justin and others, if you're not on a beach somewhere
> in the world, would you mind looking at the abovementioned file (it
> includes my minor corrections)
| Template: partman-zfs/confirm
| Type: boolean
| Default: false
| # :sl4:
| #flag:translate!:4
| Description: Write the changes to disks and configure ZFS?
^
Shouldn't that be "to disk", as below?
| Before ZFS can be configured, the current
| partitioning scheme has to be written to disk. These changes cannot
| be undone.
| .
| [...]
| Template: partman-zfs/vgdelete_confirm
| Type: boolean
| Default: true
| # :sl4:
| Description: Really delete the ZFS pool?
| Please confirm the ${VG} ZFS pool removal.
Ungrammatical. Maybe you want:
Please confirm the removal of the ZFS pool ${VG}.
(I gather "pool" is just the ZFS equivalent of a VG.)
| [...]
| Template: partman-zfs/lvcreate_nonamegiven
| Type: error
| # :sl4:
| Description: No logical volume name entered
| No name for the logical volume has been entered. Please enter a
| name.
This one still has a double space. ^^
| [...]
| Template: partman-zfs/lvdelete_error
| Type: error
| # :sl4:
| Description: Error while deleting the logical volume
| The logical volume (${LV}) on ${VG} could not be deleted.
| .
| Check /var/log/syslog or see virtual console 4 for the details.
This use of parentheses makes it sound as if it is saying that there's
only one logical volume on the pool ${VG}, and that this LV (called
${LV}) could not be deleted.
I suspect what you want so say is that the specific logical volume
${LV} which happens to be on the pool ${VG} could not be deleted:
The logical volume ${LV} on ${VG} could not be deleted.
| [...]
| Template: partman-zfs/badnamegiven
| Type: error
| # :sl4:
| Description: Invalid logical volume or ZFS pool name
| Logical volume or ZFS pool names may only contain alphanumeric
| characters, hyphen, plus, period and underscore. They must be 128
^,
(Harvard comma)
| characters or less and may not begin with a hyphen. The names "." and
| ".." are not allowed. In addition, logical volume names can not begin
| with "snapshot".
You've changed "may not begin" to "can not begin"; I'd recommend
either "cannot begin" (preventing the misreading "is able to not
begin") or if it's just suicidal rather than impossible, "should not
begin".
| [...]
| Template: partman-zfs/help
| Type: note
| # :sl4:
| Description: ZFS
| A common situation for system administrators is to find that some disk
| partition (usually the most important one) is short on space, while some
| other partition is underused. ZFS can help with this.
| .
| ZFS allows combining disk or partition devices ("physical volumes") to form
| a virtual disk ("ZFS pool"), which can then be divided into virtual
| partitions ("logical volumes"). ZFS pools and logical volumes may span
| across several physical disks. New physical volumes may be added to a ZFS
pool
| at any time, and logical volumes have no size limit other than the total
| size of the ZFS pool.
You've turned "span" to "span across"; in fact "span" can be used
alone (bridges "span" rivers), but I suppose given the choice "span
across" does give more clues to non-fluent readers.
--
JBR with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package
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