Christian Perrier wrote: > Quoting Felix Zielcke (fziel...@z-51.de): [...] >> +Template: grub-installer/superuser >> +Type: string >> +# :sl2: >> +_Description: GRUB superuser: >> + The GRUB boot loader offers many powerful interactive features, which could >> + be used to compromise your system if unauthorized users have access to the >> + machine when it is starting up. To defend against this, you may choose a >> + username and password which will be required before editing menu entries or >> + entering the GRUB command-line interface. By default, any user will still >> be >> + able to start any menu entry without entering a username and password. >> + . >> + If you do not wish to set a GRUB username, leave this field blank. >> + > > "s/your system/the system" > > maybe s/starting up/booting up" > > I'm not sure about "To defend against this"
No strong opinion on any of these (even the "you might not be the owner" quibble is weak here). > "username" or "user name"? One word. "Christian Perrier" and "Justin B Rye" are user names, but not their usernames. >> +Template: grub-installer/grub2-password [...] > > Another option is somethign similar to the root password prompt: > > _Description: GRUB password: > You need to set a password for GRUB. A malicious or unqualified user > with GRUB access can have disastrous results, so you should take care > to choose a GRUB password that is not easy to guess. It should not be > a word found in dictionaries, or a word that could be easily > associated with you. Looks good to me. >> +Template: grub-installer/empty-password >> +Type: error >> +# :sl2: >> +_Description: Empty password >> + You have given a username but no password. If you don't want authorization >> + please don't specify an username, else you have to give a password. Looks bad to me: s/an username/a username/; s/, else/; otherwise/; and you don't want (to get) authorization, you want there to be authentication. > You may want to use the same wording than the similar template in > user-setup: > > _Description: Empty password > You entered an empty password, which is not allowed. > Please choose a non-empty password. This loses the advice on what to do if you're not trying to set up a password. On the other hand, how would I apply that advice if I didn't already know about dpkg-reconfigure? Is there a "back" button? -- JBR with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to debian-boot-requ...@lists.debian.org with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact listmas...@lists.debian.org