Justin B Rye <j...@edlug.org.uk> writes:
> W. Martin Borgert wrote:
>> On 2009-02-07 18:41, Samuel Thibault wrote:
>>> Christian Perrier, le Sat 07 Feb 2009 17:05:01 +0100, a écrit :
>>>>> +<section id="install-with-speech">
>>>>> + <title>Install &debian; with a hardware speech synthesis</title>
>>>>
>>>> [...] and maybe "s/a/an"
>>>
>>> Before the h of hardware? I wouldn't say so.
>>
>> Maybe because in French you don't pronounce the 'h' at the
>> beginning of a syllable? ;~)
>
> Yes: "an hour", "a USB drive", "an xterm", "a one-off".
Just to make it clear: "an hour" but "a hardware", right?
>>>> + <para>
>>>> + Support for hardware speech syntheses is enabled only along support
>>>> for
>>>> + graphical installer. You thus need to select the
>>>> <computeroutput>Graphical
>>>> + install</computeroutput> entry in the boot menu.
>>>> + </para>
>
> Assuming this is the right content, the English needs fixing: "along
> support for graphical installer" should be "along ^with^ support for
> ^the^ graphical installer".
I'd suggest something simpler, like this, if possible (my English may
need fixing, but the idea is to get rid of "along with support for"
and s/syntheses/synthesis/):
Support for hardware speech synthesis (not syntheses) is present
only in the graphical installer.
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Regards,
Feri.
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