Your message dated 18 Nov 2000 15:06:35 -0500 with message-id <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> and subject line Bug#53565: Install documentation has caused the attached Bug report to be marked as done. This means that you claim that the problem has been dealt with. If this is not the case it is now your responsibility to reopen the Bug report if necessary, and/or fix the problem forthwith. (NB: If you are a system administrator and have no idea what I am talking about this indicates a serious mail system misconfiguration somewhere. Please contact me immediately.) Darren Benham (administrator, Debian Bugs database) -------------------------------------- Received: (at submit) by bugs.debian.org; 27 Dec 1999 23:12:14 +0000 Received: (qmail 8560 invoked from network); 27 Dec 1999 23:12:14 -0000 Received: from smtp7.atl.mindspring.net (207.69.128.51) by master.debian.org with SMTP; 27 Dec 1999 23:12:14 -0000 Received: from wheat (user-33qth3f.dialup.mindspring.com [199.174.196.111]) by smtp7.atl.mindspring.net (8.9.3/8.8.5) with SMTP id SAA20860 for <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>; Mon, 27 Dec 1999 18:12:07 -0500 (EST) Message-Id: <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> X-Sender: [EMAIL PROTECTED] X-Mailer: QUALCOMM Windows Eudora Light Version 3.0.5 (32) Date: Mon, 27 Dec 1999 15:11:02 -0800 To: [EMAIL PROTECTED] From: Ross Boylan <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> Subject: Install documentation Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii" Package: boot-floppies version: 12/20/99 unstable; 2.2.1 of "Installing Debian for Intel" Chapter 5, p 22 says "The different choices are described in .. on this page" They are not described on that page. It would be good to have a page and section reference in addition to the title of the section where they are discussed. p 23 , section 5.1.1 last sentence reads This method is described in 'Installing from a Hard Disk' on the page before. The page before has no such heading, and provides no such description. Although p. 22 says that the first boot is described in its own section [which is actually a chapter], there is no discussion of the install from hard disk there. More generally, I think the separation of the two chapters (5 + 6) and the sequencing of material between them is unfortunate. Why should the first step be to skip ahead to chapter 6, only to later return to chapter 5? Just put things in the order that someone doing an install would have to make decisions and carry out actions. The instructions are obviously out of date with respect to the evolving structure of boot floppies and files; for example, they refer to a single drivers diskette. I also vote with others who say the material on adding boot-time parameters needs to clarify that you must say "default" (or linux or ...) before, for example, hd=cyl/head/sector. This point tripped me up in the past. A note on how much to worry about drive geometry would be good; my disk has been "too large" and needed that assist with previous versions, and I don't know if that continues to be the case. --------------------------------------- Received: (at 53565-done) by bugs.debian.org; 18 Nov 2000 20:06:22 +0000 >From [EMAIL PROTECTED] Sat Nov 18 14:06:22 2000 Return-path: <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> Received: from (burrito.onshore.com) [64.22.101.122] (postfix) by master.debian.org with esmtp (Exim 3.12 1 (Debian)) id 13xEFi-0001xx-00; Sat, 18 Nov 2000 14:06:22 -0600 Received: from arroz.fake (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by burrito.onshore.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id D354693802 for <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>; Sat, 18 Nov 2000 15:06:35 -0500 (EST) Sender: [EMAIL PROTECTED] To: [EMAIL PROTECTED] Subject: Bug#53565: Install documentation From: Adam Di Carlo <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> Date: 18 Nov 2000 15:06:35 -0500 Message-ID: <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> Lines: 10 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Delivered-To: [EMAIL PROTECTED] I believe the issues raised in this bug report are all fixed. I am closing this report. Ross, if you still are finding problems, you can either fix them directly in CVS or else file new reports. I'm flushing out old and over-generalized bug reports. -- .....Adam Di [EMAIL PROTECTED]<URL:http://www.onShore.com/> -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to [EMAIL PROTECTED] with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact [EMAIL PROTECTED]