Hi, On Sun, Mar 17, 2019 at 01:49:45AM +0100, Laura Arjona Reina wrote: > Dear all > > Please review the article that we plan to publish on Sunday or Monday > about DebConf registration open: > > https://bits.debian.org/drafts/debconf19-open-registration-bursary.html
I didn't copy read, so this isn't about possible typographical errors or spelling mistakes. (I'm not the best for that kind of review.) But, I did read it through a few times. It looks mostly good to me, but I would recommend a bit more claritly around the deadlines. For example, the last sentence in the third paragraph states that "[t]he last day for confirmation or cancellation is June 14th, 2019." But, the first sentence of the 5th paragraph below that says: "Attention: the registration for DebConf19 will be open until the day of the Conference..." which leads me to wonder what my status is if I register between the last day for confirmation/cancellation (14 June) and the day of the Conference (21 June). I can register but I'm too late to confirm, so am I in some sort of wait-list state limbo? Also, I would make the deadlines more precise such as June 14 23:59:59 UTC ou April 15th 23:59:59 UTC, or whatever time is convenient for the people that have to flip wafer switches and change tasks at the deadlines given. But, overall the article looks well done and clear. -- Znoteer znot...@mailbox.org
