Daniel Gerzo wrote:
danger      2007-03-22 20:30:18 UTC

  FreeBSD doc repository

  Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook Makefile book.sgml chapters.ent Added files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails chapter.sgml Log:
  Add a new Handbook chapter about FreeBSD jails. It has been originally written
  by Matteo Riondato and further work has been done by me and my great mentors.
  Despite it took months to get it in, we believe it's a right time to commit 
and
  have a wider audience to look at it, and improve it even more. I hope you will
  like it :-)
Approbed by: trhodes (mentor), keramida (mentor) Revision Changes Path
  1.101     +1 -0      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/Makefile
  1.170     +2 -0      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/book.sgml
  1.36      +1 -0      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/chapters.ent
  1.1       +463 -0    doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails/chapter.sgml 
(new)
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Thanks for the great new chapter (one more chapter is added to my
translation work :().

The following sentence seems to be missing parentheses.

     <para>Attach to a running jail, from its host system, and run
       a command inside the jail administrative tasks inside the
       jail itself).

It could be:

     <para>Attach to a running jail, from its host system, and run
       a command inside the jail (administrative tasks inside the
       jail itself).

Maybe I'm wrong here.

thanks,

Ganbold


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