On Sun, 6 Nov 2011, Benjamin Kaduk wrote:
On Sat, 5 Nov 2011, Daniel Gerzo wrote:
danger 2011-11-05 14:59:08 UTC
FreeBSD doc repository
Added files:
en/news/status report-2011-07-2011-09.xml
Log:
- add the status report for Q3/2011
Please review. I'd like to connect it to the build and release it on
Monday
Hi Daniel,
The attached patch runs something resembling a grammar comb over the entries.
I sent a patch yesterday, but didn't think to post it. Sorry about
that, attached.
I worry that I have changed the meaning of the Ethernet Switch Framework
entry, though -- it was quite hard to make sense of.
One paragraph in there I would edit to
Ethernet switches are found in many embedded devices and some
multiport NICs. The switch framework is designed to easily control
basic switch management features like VLANs, QOS, and port
mirroring.
But it was not included in my patch because I wasn't sure of the
meaning.--- report-2011-07-2011-09.xml.orig 2011-11-06 08:52:19.000000000 -0700
+++ report-2011-07-2011-09.xml 2011-11-06 09:21:04.000000000 -0700
@@ -357,15 +357,15 @@
<body>
<p>ZFSguru is a newly designed Network Attached Storage operating
- system, much like FreeNAS is. The difference is that ZFSguru
+ system, much like FreeNAS. The difference is that ZFSguru
focuses heavily on ZFS and user friendly operation, and uses a full
&os; distribution with no elements stripped down. This allows
- for people new to &os; and UNIX in general to access the power
+ people new to &os; and UNIX in general to access the power
of ZFS, while still allowing more advanced users to tweak their NAS
- with additional functionality and use it as normal &os;
+ with additional functionality and use it as a normal &os;
distribution.</p>
- <p>Started little over a year ago, the ZFSguru project is making
+ <p>Started a little over a year ago, the ZFSguru project is making
good progress. It should already be one of the most user friendly
distributions focused on ZFS, and sports some very unique features.
The advanced ZFS benchmarking and convenient Root-on-ZFS
@@ -507,7 +507,7 @@
<links>
<url href="http://wiki.FreeBSD.org/ZhihaoSoC2011";>&os;
- Wiki</url>
+ Wiki</url>
<url href="https://github.com/lichray/nvi2";>Github page</url>
</links>
@@ -529,9 +529,9 @@
never change the actual encoding, and the detection failbacks to
locale.</li>
<li>Pavel Timofeev provided a full Russian translation of the
- catalog. Thanks him.</li>
+ catalog. Thanks to him.</li>
<li>Now nvi-iconv is able to be compiled with widechar only and
- without iconv (inspired by a user on FreeBSDChina.org). In such
+ without iconv (inspired by a user on FreeBSDChina.org). In that
case, it only supports your locale.</li>
</ul>
</body>
@@ -570,14 +570,14 @@
PACKETpro family of embedded processors.</p>
<p>The chip includes two Power Architecture PPC465 processor cores,
- which are compliant with Book-E specification of the architecture,
+ which are compliant with the Book-E specification of the architecture,
and a number of integrated peripherals.</p>
<p>This work is extending current Book-E support in &os; towards
PPC4xx processors variation along with device drivers for
integrated peripherials.</p>
- <p>Following drivers has been created since last report:</p>
+ <p>The following drivers have been created since last the report:</p>
<ul>
<li>Interrupt controller</li>
@@ -619,14 +619,14 @@
<body>
<p>Marvell Armada XP is a complete system-on-chip solution based on
- Sheeva embedded CPU. These devices integrate up to four ARMv6/v7
+ the Sheeva embedded CPU. These devices integrate up to four ARMv6/v7
compliant Sheeva CPU cores with shared L2 cache.</p>
<p>This work is extending &os;/arm infrastructure towards
support for recent ARM architecture variations along with a basic
- set of device drivers for integrated peripherials.</p>
+ set of device drivers for integrated peripherals.</p>
- <p>The following code has been implemented since last status
+ <p>The following code has been implemented since the last status
report:</p>
<ul>
@@ -714,17 +714,17 @@
<body>
<p>I am now working on significant rewrite of CARP in &os;.</p>
- <p>The reason for this work is that CARP protocol actually does
+ <p>The reason for this work is that the CARP protocol actually does
not bring a new interface, but is a property of interface address.
Rewriting it in this way helps to remove several hacks from
incoming packet processing, simplifies some code, makes CARP
- addresses more sane from viewpoint of routing daemons such as
+ addresses more sane from the viewpoint of routing daemons such as
quagga/zebra and closes many CARP-related PRs in GNATS. It also
brings support for a single redundant address on the subnet, the
thing that is called "carpdev feature" in OpenBSD, long awaited in
&os;.</p>
- <p>For this moment I have got a patch against head/ that compiles and
+ <p>For this moment I have a patch against head/ that compiles and
works in my test environment that I am going to deploy soon on some
of servers under my control.</p>
@@ -734,7 +734,7 @@
<help>
<task>More testing requested!</task>
- <task>Implement arpbalance & ipbalance features. This require a
+ <task>Implement arpbalance and ipbalance features. This requires a
next step of rewriting, probably borrowing some ideas from
OpenBSD.</task>
@@ -944,7 +944,7 @@
developers of today's open-source BSD systems to popularize their
work and their organizations, and to meet each other in the real
life. We wanted to motivate potential future developers
- and users, especially undergraduate university students to work
+ and users, especially undergraduate university students, to work
with BSD systems.</p>
<p>This year's BSD-Day was be held in Bratislava, Slovakia at
@@ -1106,7 +1106,7 @@
</project>
<project cat='proj'>
- <title>ZRouter.org project - a &os; based firmware for embedded
+ <title>ZRouter.org project - a &os;-based firmware for embedded
devices</title>
<contact>
@@ -1129,9 +1129,10 @@
</links>
<body>
- <p>ZRouter.org is a young project that targeting to produce &os;
- based firmware for small boxes such a SOHO router, APs, etc. At
- present time ZRouter.org able to build working firmware for:</p>
+ <p>ZRouter.org is a young project that is targeting to produce
+ &os;-based firmware for small boxes such a SOHO router, APs,
+ etc. At the present time ZRouter.org is able to build working
+ firmware for:</p>
<ul>
<li>D-Link DAP-1350</li>
@@ -1150,16 +1151,16 @@
<p>Currently we are working on most parts of the core system but we
are also in the planning phase for implementing a simple web-based
- GUI which we hope will have taken form before next &os; status
+ GUI which we hope will have taken form before the next &os; status
report.</p>
- <p>We still have many items not done, so any devices in that list
- cannot be called as "Production Ready" yet. But we work on that.</p>
+ <p>We still have many items not done, so devices in that list
+ cannot be called "Production Ready" yet. But we work on that.</p>
<p>It is easy to add new devices, because we have separate
definition of board and SoC(System on Chip), so if you have "Asus
WL-500g Premium v2" for example, you can copy D-Link/DIR-320
- directory and tweak to work for you device. We already have basic
+ directory and tweak to work for your device. We already have basic
support for:</p>
<ul>
@@ -1209,11 +1210,11 @@
</links>
<body>
- <p>Many embedded devices have Ethernet switch on board, same take a
- place on some multiports NICs, switch framework designed to give
- ability to user easily control basic futures that management
- switches have, such a VLANs, QOS, port mirroring, etc. Currently we
- able to control only VLANs on:</p>
+ <p>Many embedded devices have an Ethernet switch on board, same
+ take a place on some multiports NICs, switch framework designed
+ to give ability to user easily control basic futures that
+ management switches have, such a VLANs, QOS, port mirroring,
+ etc. Currently we are able to control only VLANs on:</p>
<ul>
<li>Atheros AR8216/AR8316 (standalone and embedded in
@@ -1256,21 +1257,20 @@
</links>
<body>
- <p>A set of scripts, to make easy of building &os; VM
- images.</p>
+ <p>A set of scripts to make building &os; VM images easy.</p>
- <p>Providing a way to make regular build images of latest version
- from SVN. Images currently can be `dd` to USB flash (to make real
- hardware testing), VirtualBox (.vdi).</p>
+ <p>Providing a way to make regular build images of the latest
+ version from SVN. Images currently can be `dd` to USB flash (to
+ test on real hardware), VirtualBox (.vdi).</p>
</body>
<help>
<task>Build images with ports-set from main port-tree</task>
<task>Build images with ports-set from main port-tree plus
- overrides form area51 (Like expeerimental images)</task>
+ overrides form area51 (like experimental images)</task>
- <task>Build images with special development branches included (Like
+ <task>Build images with special development branches included (like
for testing drivers)</task>
</help>
</project>
@@ -1305,7 +1305,7 @@
<body>
<p>After a few rather quiet months, the &os; Greek Documentation
- Project is back in track, translating and improving the Handbook,
+ Project is back on track, translating and improving the Handbook,
FAQ and &os; articles. The new bsdinstall chapter has been
translated and is now present in the Handbook. Our <a
href="http://www.FreeBSDgr.org/handbook";>experimental Handbook
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