On Mon, 4 Jan 2010, Doug Barton wrote: > dougb 2010-01-04 20:38:15 UTC > > Modified files: > en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook book.sgml > Log: > Actually having the $FreeBSD$ tag expanded in the example rc.d script > did not end up looking as cool as I thought it would, so switch to an > unexpanded example. > > Fix the text in the new paragraph to work better around the markup.
> <para> Unless there is a good reason to start the service > earlier all ports scripts should use >- <programlisting>REQUIRE: LOGIN</programlisting>. If the service >+ <programlisting>REQUIRE: LOGIN</programlisting> If the service > runs as a particular user (other than root) this is mandatory. This is now grammatically incorrect. I actually think the original is better than any rewording I can come up with. Gavin _______________________________________________ cvs-all@freebsd.org mailing list http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/cvs-all To unsubscribe, send any mail to "cvs-all-unsubscr...@freebsd.org"
