Hi Brian

See latest changes here:

http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~reinhapa/reviews/8067661/webrev.03

-Patrick

> Am 14.11.2017 um 01:34 schrieb Brian Burkhalter <brian.burkhal...@oracle.com>:
> 
> Hi Patrick,
> 
> More editorial comments ... ;-)
> 

No problem :-)

> In Readable.java these lines
> 
>   73      * Depending on which class implements the appendable, there may be 
> a limit
>   74      * of data that can written to which in turn could lead to an 
> exception.
> 
> are a bit unclear to me. Do you mean to say a limit on the amount of data, 
> i.e., number of characters, which may be transferred? If so, then perhaps 
> something like this?:
> 
> “Note that it is possible an implementing class may limit the number of 
> characters which may be transferred and throw an exception if this limit is 
> exceeded.”

That describes it better than the actual version and therefore changed

> 
> In X-Buffer.java.template at lines 1556-1561 the following might be 
> considered as an alternative wording:
> 
> “The implementation transfers data by one of two means. If the given {@link 
> Appendable} is a {@link CharBuffer}, {@code put(CharBuffer)} is invoked on it 
> with this buffer as parameter. Otherwise {@link 
> Appendable#append(CharSequence, int, int)} is invoked on it with this buffer 
> and its position and length as parameters.”
> 

Seems also improve the wording - changed

> Thanks,
> 
> Brian
> 
> On Nov 13, 2017, at 2:23 PM, Patrick Reinhart <patr...@reini.net> wrote:
> 
>> Latest changes:
>> 
>> http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~reinhapa/reviews/8067661/webrev.03
> 

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