svn commit: r1510782 - /openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/download/checksums.html

[marcus]

Author: marcus
Date: Mon Aug  5 22:13:17 2013
New Revision: 1510782

URL: http://svn.apache.org/r1510782
Log:
#122905# Corrected English language, suggested by sebb

Modified:
    openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/download/checksums.html

Modified: openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/download/checksums.html
URL: 
http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/download/checksums.html?rev=1510782&r1=1510781&r2=1510782&view=diff
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--- openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/download/checksums.html (original)
+++ openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/download/checksums.html Mon Aug  5 
22:13:17 2013
@@ -54,8 +54,8 @@
 processed on the downloaded file is a way to make sure that the content is 
transferred OK and has not been damaged during
 the download process.</p>
 <p><b>Note:</b><br />
-There is no need to do all verifications. It is sufficient to verify the 
signature, SHA256 or MD5 hash. However, it is
-recommended to prefer the SHA256 method than MD5.</p>
+There is no need to do all the verifications. The best is to check the PGP 
signature (.asc) file. Failing that, use the
+SHA256 hash, otherwise use the MD5 hash.</p>
 <br />
 
 <h3 id="pgp_win">Verify on Windows</h3>
@@ -156,7 +156,7 @@ recommended to prefer the SHA256 method 
   <li>or</li>
   <li><pre>sha256sum -c &lt;AOO file&gt;.tar.gz.sha256</pre></li>
   <li>&nbsp;</li>
-  <li>When both SHA256 / MD5 hash values match it is indicated with an 
"&lt;AOO file&gt;.tar.gz: OK" statement.
+  <li>If the hash matches this is indicated by "&lt;AOO file&gt;.tar.gz: OK".
   <br />Otherwise "WARNING: 1 of 1 computed checksum did NOT match".</li>
   <li>If they do not match, please see the <a href="#no_match" title="What to 
do when the values do not match?">
   section below</a>.</li>
@@ -202,7 +202,7 @@ recommended to prefer the SHA256 method 
   <li><pre>openssl dgst -sha256 &lt;AOO file&gt;.dmg</pre></li>
   <li><pre>cat &lt;SHA256 file&gt;.sha256</pre></li>
   <li>&nbsp;</li>
-  <li>Now compare both SHA256 / MD5 hash values.</li>
+  <li>Now compare the hash generated by OpenSSL with the value in the 
file.</li>
   <li>If they do not match, please see the <a href="#no_match" title="What to 
do when the values do not match?">
   section below</a>.</li>
 </ul>