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URL: https://github.com/apache/nuttx/pull/15852#issuecomment-2663645659

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   This PR summary does not fully meet the NuttX requirements. Here's a 
breakdown and suggested improvements:
   
   **What's Missing/Needs Improvement:**
   
   * **Summary:** While it mentions adding I2S support and DMA, it lacks 
crucial details:
       * **Necessity:** *Why* is this change needed?  Is there no I2S support 
currently? Are existing solutions inadequate?  What benefits does this 
implementation bring (e.g., performance, features)?
       * **Functional Change Description:**  Be more specific.  Which files 
were modified?  Did you create new drivers?  Were existing drivers extended?  
Mentioning "common layer" is too vague.  What common layer?
       * **How it works:** Explain the interaction between I2S, DMA, and the 
ESP32 hardware at a high level.  What are the key data flow paths?
       * **Issue References:**  Link any related NuttX or NuttX Apps issues. 
This is essential for traceability.
   
   * **Impact:**  Listing ESP32-C3, ESP32-C6, and ESP32-H2 is insufficient. You 
must explicitly answer the impact questions with YES/NO and provide 
descriptions where necessary.  For example:
       * **New Feature?** YES (I2S support)
       * **User Impact?**  Potentially YES. If users want to use I2S, they will 
need to configure the driver and potentially write applications to utilize it. 
Explain how users interact with the new feature.
       * **Build Impact?**  Potentially YES.  Will any new Kconfig options be 
introduced?  Will users need to select new build configurations?
       * **Hardware Impact?** YES. Clearly state the affected architectures 
(RISC-V), boards (esp32c3-generic, esp32c6-devkitc, esp32h2-devkit), and the 
drivers involved (I2S, DMA).
       * **Documentation Impact?** YES.  You *must* update the documentation to 
describe how to use the new I2S and DMA features.  State that documentation is 
included in the PR.
       * **Security Impact?**  Consider potential security implications.  Are 
there any new attack surfaces introduced by this feature?  Even if the answer 
is NO, explicitly state it.
       * **Compatibility Impact?**  Does this break any existing functionality? 
 Does it impact future development in any way?
   
   * **Testing:**
       * **Build Host(s):** Specify your build host details (OS, CPU 
architecture, compiler version).
       * **Target(s):** While you listed the boards and configurations, be 
explicit about the architecture (RISC-V).  
       * **Testing Logs _Before_ Change:**  You need to provide logs 
demonstrating the *lack* of I2S functionality before your changes.  This shows 
that your changes actually address a gap.
       * **Testing Logs _After_ Change:** The logs provided are a good start, 
but explain what each part demonstrates. For instance, mention that the 
loopback test shows data integrity. Consider adding logs showing different 
configurations or use cases.
   
   
   
   
   **Revised Summary Example:**
   
   This PR adds I2S support for the ESP32-C3, ESP32-C6, and ESP32-H2 RISC-V 
platforms in NuttX. Currently, these platforms lack I2S functionality. This 
implementation provides a new I2S driver leveraging the ESP32's DMA 
capabilities for efficient data transfer. The driver interacts with the `audio` 
framework and exposes a standard interface for applications to use.  The 
`arch/riscv/src/esp32` directory contains the core driver implementation, and 
modifications were made to the common ESP32 HAL to support I2S initialization. 
This change is related to [NuttX Issue #XYZ] (if applicable).
   
   **Revised Impact Example:**
   
   * **New feature added?** YES (I2S support)
   * **Impact on user?** YES. Users will need to configure the I2S driver using 
Kconfig options and utilize the provided APIs in their applications to access 
I2S functionality. Documentation is provided in this PR.
   * **Impact on build?** YES. New Kconfig options are introduced to configure 
the I2S driver (e.g., DMA channel selection, clock settings). Users will need 
to select these options to enable I2S support for their target board.
   * **Impact on hardware?** YES. This affects the RISC-V architecture, 
specifically the ESP32-C3, ESP32-C6, and ESP32-H2 boards.  The I2S and DMA 
peripherals are utilized.
   * **Impact on documentation?** YES. Documentation is included in this PR to 
describe the driver configuration and usage.
   * **Impact on security?** NO.  This implementation does not introduce any 
new security vulnerabilities.
   * **Impact on compatibility?** NO. This change does not impact backward 
compatibility or introduce any known compatibility issues.
   
   
   By providing more comprehensive information and addressing all the required 
points, you'll significantly improve the quality of your PR and make it easier 
for reviewers to understand and approve your changes. Remember to replace the 
placeholders like `[NuttX Issue #XYZ]` with actual issue numbers.
   


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