justinmclean commented on code in PR #6659:
URL: https://github.com/apache/gravitino/pull/6659#discussion_r1990395702


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docs/how-to-build.md:
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@@ -4,244 +4,232 @@ slug: /how-to-build
 license: "This software is licensed under the Apache License version 2."
 ---
 
-- [Prerequisites](#prerequisites)
-- [Quick start](#quick-start)
-- [How to Build Apache Gravitino on Windows (Using 
WSL)](#how-to-build-apache-gravitino-on-windows-using-wsl)
-
 ## Prerequisites
 
-+ Linux or macOS operating system
-+ Git
-+ A Java Development Kit, version 8 to 17, installed in your environment to 
launch Gradle
-+ Python 3.8, 3.9, 3.10, or 3.11 to build the Gravitino Python client
-+ Optionally, Docker to run integration tests
-
-:::info Please read the following notes before trying to build Gravitino.
-
-+ Gravitino requires a minimum of JDK8 and supports up to JDK17 to run Gradle, 
so you need to install a JDK, version 8 to 17, to launch the build environment.
-+ Gravitino itself supports using JDK 8, 11, or 17 to build. The Gravitino 
Trino connector uses JDK17 to build (to avoid vendor-related issues on some 
platforms, Gravitino uses the specified Amazon Corretto OpenJDK 17 to build the 
Trino connector on macOS).
- You don't have to preinstall the specified JDK environment, as Gradle detects 
the JDK version needed and downloads it automatically.
-+ Gravitino uses the Gradle Java Toolchain to detect and manage JDK versions, 
and it checks the installed JDK by running the `./gradlew javaToolchains` 
command. See [Gradle Java 
Toolchain](https://docs.gradle.org/current/userguide/toolchains.html#sec:java_toolchain).
-+ Gravitino excludes all Docker-related tests by default. To run 
Docker-related tests, make sure you have installed Docker in your environment 
and either (1) set `skipDockerTests=false` in the `gradle.properties` file (or 
use `-PskipDockerTests=false` in the command) or (2) `export 
SKIP_DOCKER_TESTS=false` in the shell. Otherwise, all tests requiring Docker 
will be skipped.
-+ macOS uses `docker-connector` to make the Gravitino Trino connector work 
with Docker for macOS. See 
[docker-connector](https://github.com/wenjunxiao/mac-docker-connector), 
`$GRAVITINO_HOME/dev/docker/tools/mac-docker-connector.sh`, and 
`$GRAVITINO_HOME/dev/docker/tools/README.md` for more details.
-+ You can use OrbStack as a replacement for Docker for macOS. See 
[OrbStack](https://orbstack.dev/). With OrbStack, you can run Gravitino 
integration tests without needing to install `docker-connector`.
-+ Depending on how you deploy Gravitino, other software used in conjunction 
with Gravitino may contain known security vulnerabilities.
-:::
-
-## Quick start
+- Linux, macOS or Windows operating system
+- Git
+- JDK 8 (default), 11 or 17 for running Gradle, the build environment for 
Gravitino.
+- Python 3.8 (default), 3.9, 3.10, or 3.11, for building the Gravitino Python 
client
+- Docker (optional), for running the integration tests
 
-1. Clone the Gravitino project.
-
-   If you want to contribute to this open-source project, please fork the 
project on GitHub first. After forking, clone the forked project to your local 
environment, make your changes, and submit a pull request (PR).
+:::note
+Depending on how you deploy Gravitino, there may be contain known security 
vulnerabilities
+in other software used in conjunction with Gravitino.
+:::
 
-   ```shell
-   git clone g...@github.com:apache/gravitino.git
-   ```
+### Install WSL on Windows
 
-2. Build the Gravitino project. Running this for the first time can take 15 
minutes or more.
+If you are building Gravitino on a Linux or macOS machine, you can proceed to 
the [next section](#install-jdk).
+To build Apache Gravitino on Windows, you need to install the Windows 
Subsystem for Linux (WSL)
+from Microsoft which provides you a Linux-like environment for development.
+For installing WSL, refer to the [WSL Installation 
Guide](https://learn.microsoft.com/en-us/windows/wsl/install).
+The following steps assume that you have installed Unbuntu which is the 
default distribution for WSL.

Review Comment:
   Breaking sentatn ces over lines hive seval errors in the above text. "have 
installed Unbuntu, which is" or just "have installed Unbuntu, the default"



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