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-<section>
-    <title>We Need Feedback!</title>
-     <indexterm>
+<section id="feedback">
+    <title>Submitting Feedback and Getting Help</title>
+    <indexterm>
         <primary>feedback1</primary>
-         <secondary>contact information for this brand</secondary>
+        <secondary>contact information for this brand</secondary>
 
     </indexterm>
-     <para>If you find a typographical error in this manual, or if you have 
thought of a way to make this manual better, we would love to hear from you! 
Please submit a bug: <ulink 
url="https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/CLOUDSTACK";>https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/CLOUDSTACK</ulink>
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+    <para>If you find a typographical error in this manual, or if you have 
thought of a way to make this manual better, we would love to hear from you! 
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-    <para>Better yet, feel free to submit a patch if you would like to enhance 
the documentation. Our documentation is, along with the rest of the CloudStack 
source code, kept in the project's git repository.</para>
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is for discussions
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possible bugs in CloudStack.
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