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(Updated Dec. 17, 2012, 3:56 p.m.)


Review request for cloudstack, David Nalley, Jessica Tomechak, and Joe 
Brockmeier.


Changes
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Corrected caps on titles 
Corrected two things pointed by Jessica, third thing was not a problem (the 
sentence continued)
Pulled latest master, applied patch, tested it, built pdf and verified content.
Trailing whitespace warning on git apply, I will work on getting rid of these 
in next reviews.
User registration discussion is on-going on mailing list but it is indeed still 
required for now.


Description
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Solves multiple issues:
1-CS-364 reported a reference to the awsapi register script on cloud.com. I 
added a reference to the script directly from the git repo. A bit ugly but it 
works.
2-Addressed all items from CS-464:
--two png files were ommitted/lost in a prior commit, I added them here and 
added the paragraphs that were using those pics.
--removed mention of EC2 REST and replaced with EC2 query, added mention of S3 
REST API
--made notes that EC2 Query and S3 REST were WIP.
--added an examples section, populated with boto examples
--re-worded/re-formatted some parts with the idea to make it a general AWS API 
chapter and not only an EC2 chapter

There are still things to work on: especially the user registration part (is it 
needed for EC2 Query ?, the change of port (needs to be checked). More info 
about S3 ). Will discuss this on the list.


This addresses bugs CS-364, CS-464 and and.


Diffs (updated)
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  docs/en-US/aws-api-examples.xml PRE-CREATION 
  docs/en-US/aws-ec2-configuration.xml d6c4066 
  docs/en-US/aws-ec2-introduction.xml a4df086 
  docs/en-US/aws-ec2-requirements.xml 59fb5b6 
  docs/en-US/aws-ec2-supported-commands.xml 9494218 
  docs/en-US/aws-ec2-timeouts.xml c8b3ec6 
  docs/en-US/aws-ec2-user-setup.xml 8607378 
  docs/en-US/aws-interface-compatibility.xml a03d447 
  docs/en-US/images/compute-service-offerings.png PRE-CREATION 
  docs/en-US/images/ec2-s3-configuration.png PRE-CREATION 

Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/8237/diff/


Testing
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publican build --formats=pdf --langs=en-US --config=publican-installation.cfg 
--common_content=./Common_Content/
and checked the pdf


Thanks,

Sebastien Goasguen

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