> On Sept. 12, 2012, 6:47 a.m., David Nalley wrote: > > Hi Gavin, > > > > Thanks for the work, that looks much better - I did find a couple more > > issues when reading over the text - one needs to be corrected I imagine, > > the other is up to you. > > > > There are several occurrences of CloudStack that should be &PRODUCT; > > > > The optional issue is that there are a number of references to old versions > > of CloudStack (3.0.0, 3.0.2) that seem superfluous for a 4.0.0 install > > manual. > > > > --David
Thanks David, I replaced CloudPlatform with &PRODUCT; for item CloudStack, originally I was not sure if I need to change to &PRODUCT; because both existed in other xmls. I'll change them based on your suggestion. Please hold on a moment. - Gavin ----------------------------------------------------------- This is an automatically generated e-mail. To reply, visit: https://reviews.apache.org/r/6917/#review11389 ----------------------------------------------------------- On Sept. 12, 2012, 6:43 a.m., Gavin Lee wrote: > > ----------------------------------------------------------- > This is an automatically generated e-mail. To reply, visit: > https://reviews.apache.org/r/6917/ > ----------------------------------------------------------- > > (Updated Sept. 12, 2012, 6:43 a.m.) > > > Review request for cloudstack, David Nalley and Jessica Tomechak. > > > Description > ------- > > Add docbook xml for Citrix Xenserver Installation. > > > Diffs > ----- > > docs/en-US/citrix-xenserver-installation.xml PRE-CREATION > docs/en-US/provisioning-steps.xml fda3e17 > > Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/6917/diff/ > > > Testing > ------- > > Passed publican build and verified html/pdf outputs. > > > Thanks, > > Gavin Lee > >
