Review: Needs Fixing

I think the wording is still a bit unclear (see my in-line comment), could you 
sort it out?

Diff comments:

> diff --git a/definitions/basic_installation.xml 
> b/definitions/basic_installation.xml
> index 6e1951a..40310f6 100644
> --- a/definitions/basic_installation.xml
> +++ b/definitions/basic_installation.xml
> @@ -134,7 +134,7 @@
>      <dt>Select your timezone, and click on the Continue button</dt>
>          <dd>The 'Who are you?' screen appears</dd>
>      <dt>Input your initial user details and password <em>admin can not be 
> used - it is a dedicated Linux User</em></dt>
> -        <dd>'Require my password...' is selected but 'log in automatically' 
> option is shown</dd>
> +        <dd>'Require my password...' is selected but 'log in automatically' 
> or 'require password to log in' option is shown</dd>

Well this is going to be an awkward phrase but you want 'log in automatically' 
selected and 'require password to log in' not selected. Can you adjust the 
wording to reflect the difference?

>          <dd>Name, username and password are accepted.</dd>
>          <dd>Continue button becomes available</dd>
>      <dt>Press Continue</dt>


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