[I'm not sure why the original mail didn't seem to hit the list] On 2/26/19 1:34 PM, HaimMelamed wrote: > hello, > after reading, maybe its better to change words like "while" with "wereas" > or "despite of" or "in contrast of" ...... > because the confusion of known operational commands like "ifelse" or > "forloop" or "while" or "until". > best regards >
Rather than a vague suggestion, it's easier to evaluate this if you can propose an actual patch (showing both the before and after of a sentence you find confusing without your rewording). "despite of" and "in contrast of" are not idiomatic English; while I don't mind helping you come up with grammar that matches a native speaker's expectations, it's hard to do that without having an actual sentence being changed, rather than just a couple of words from an unspecified sentence. -- Eric Blake, Principal Software Engineer Red Hat, Inc. +1-919-301-3226 Virtualization: qemu.org | libvirt.org
