Simon, you wrote Saturday, December 03, 2016 10:04 PM

> Thanks for taking the time. I think you ‘nailed it’ :-), except that for 
> my feeling it’s somewhat too verbose, as well as too ‘apologetic’. I 
> attach an alternative proposal and ask for other’s opinions.

I agree this looks good.  I'd suggest one further change:

- ensures the contents of the website to be
- up to date with the rest of the documentation.
+ ensures the website content is consistent
+ with the rest of the documentation.

Trevor
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