> If you don't mind I could push the following instruction: [...]

Linguistic nitpick: In ‘The following example specifies the Shepherd package
for operating system’ doesn't seem to be grammatical.  Perhaps write
‘[...] for the operating system’ or ‘[...] of the operating system.’?

Otherwise LGTM!

Thanks,
Maxime

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