Thanks for catching these! I applied most of the changes. See below (nitpicking ahead!).
Andreas Enge <[email protected]> skribis: > --- guix.alt/doc/guix.texi 2012-12-11 21:53:49.000000000 +0100 > +++ guix/doc/guix.texi 2012-12-11 22:20:49.000000000 +0100 > @@ -105,7 +105,7 @@ > @cindex package store > The result of package build functions is @dfn{cached} in the file > system, in a special directory called the @dfn{package store}. In > -practice, each package is installed in a directory of its own, in the > +practice, each package is installed in a subdirectory of its own in the A sub-directory is also a directory. Saying that it’s under /nix/store should make the “sub” part clear, IMO. > -scripts, etc. This direct correspondence allows users to make sure a > +scripts, etc.. This direct correspondence allows users to make sure a I think the two periods would look odd, typographically. > -Primarily, @var{options} specify the operations to be performed during > +Primarily, @var{options} specifies the operations to be performed during A trick meant to be equivalent to “the options listed in @var{options}”. Thanks! Ludo’.
