On Jul 5, 2016, at 15:03, Dave Mielke <d...@mielke.cc> wrote: > [quoted lines by Rich Morin on 2016/07/05 at 09:29 -0700] >> I would add a descriptive section on "Distribution Formats", near the top >> of the page (eg, just below the "Copyright and Disclaimer"). > > Please check it out and comment.
My first comment is that I really appreciate the positive way in which folks have accepted my critiques and suggestions! However, because no good deed goes unpunished, here are some more nits! -r The "Download Formats" section contains a number of lists. Most of these are ordered alphabetically, but some are not. I'd sort them all. If `tmux` uses the `screen` driver, this should be mentioned in the `screen` entry and cross-references in a separate entry. If not, explain how `tmux` is supported. Typos, etc: fascilitate -> facilitate TCL -> Tcl XWindow -> X-Windows The "Current Release" section is missing a "<P>" above the initial table. There should be a "<P>" before the .arch.rpm installation entry. In "The Development Repository" section, there should be a "<P>" before the "If you'd prefer ..." entry. I would move "Old Releases" onto a separate page, linking to it from a brief entry in this one. For extra credit, convert the initial reference to "external" terms into links to Wikipedia pages, etc. For example: Android, AtSpi, AtSpi2. eSpeak, Fedora, Festival, Festival Lite, gzip, Java, Linux, Python, OCaml, Red Hat, Speech Dispatcher, screen, Systemd, tar, Udev, USB, Win32, Windows, WinUSB, X-Windows, xz -- http://www.cfcl.com/rdm Rich Morin r...@cfcl.com http://www.cfcl.com/rdm/resume San Bruno, CA, USA +1 650-873-7841 Software system design, development, and documentation _______________________________________________ This message was sent via the BRLTTY mailing list. To post a message, send an e-mail to: BRLTTY@mielke.cc For general information, go to: http://mielke.cc/mailman/listinfo/brltty
