Hi Authors, I have completed a review of -05 and -06. A lot of the feedback has been incorporated, especially in the -05 significant update. I appreciate the thoroughness, thank you.
Please fine below a few final comments based on -06. These are non-blocking comments seeking clarifications or minor corrections, and in my view the document is complete and ready to progress. * There is a new Informative Ref on draft-ietf-bess-pbb-evpn-isid-cmacflush-00.txt ; I presume this will not slow down this draft. * IANA pre-allocation section still requests EC 0x7 (which has been removed from draft). Can IANA request also be removed/released ? * Section 5.4 last sentence: s/MAC route/BMAC route/ of the port for PBB-? * Section 5.5, bullet 3 should not read “withdraw the previously advertised MAC”-- but refer to the fact that this “MAC” is really just a colouring EC of the aggregation route and intent is actually to “withdraw the previously advertised Type-3 vESI route (ES/EAD for EVPN, or BMAC for PBB-EVPN)” Nits: * Please use &nbhy; to prevent PBB-EVPN breaking on the hyphen (s 3.7 esp.) * Last para s. 5: s/baesd/based * s. 5.4 s/each vES MAY be color with/colored/ Regards, Luc André Luc André Burdet | Cisco | [email protected] | Tel: +1 613 254 4814
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